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a submissive's lust
you pound
at the doors of my mind
in & out
& ever deeper
with each stroke
my gods how i ache
girly parts on fire
you are the intellectual demon
that feeds my hunger
i crave you
as i cream out my disease
scream my need
you tease me
beat me down
piss down my throat
gangbang me
with poetic fuckery
no lube i like it rough
enter with force
break down my barriers
lust licks at my inner sanctum
fucks my very soul
there is no other like you
you ride me hard
& i cry out to the deities
let me have release
though it's not to be on this eve
i need your mercy
your command
that it may rain in my inner garden
come to me
when my tempest rages
i know you hold the power
but don't deny this lady
in my submission
this collared woman
holds the key
to your most ungodly
orgasmic pleasures
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 4th Aug 2017
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4th Aug 2017 3:41am
You morbid angel
You dirty goddess
You saintly demon
You slutty butterfly
Awesome fucking write 🌟🌟🌟🌹
You dirty goddess
You saintly demon
You slutty butterfly
Awesome fucking write 🌟🌟🌟🌹
4th Aug 2017 12:45pm
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 4:21am
🔐 and 🔑!!!!
DAAAAYYYYYUUUMMMMM !!!!!
DAAAAYYYYYUUUMMMMM !!!!!
4th Aug 2017 12:46pm
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 4:23am
My Beautiful Brenda...such a lady you are while knowing all the woman you are! These lines got me all wriggly in my seat!
"you tease me
beat me down
piss down my throat
gangbang me
with poetic fuckery
no lube i like it rough
enter with force
break down my barriers
lust licks at my inner sanctum
fucks my very soul
there is no other like you"
Goood lawwwwwwd my love! Fucking hot write!
I love you passionately!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
"you tease me
beat me down
piss down my throat
gangbang me
with poetic fuckery
no lube i like it rough
enter with force
break down my barriers
lust licks at my inner sanctum
fucks my very soul
there is no other like you"
Goood lawwwwwwd my love! Fucking hot write!
I love you passionately!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
4th Aug 2017 12:47pm
thank you my love you always bring me the biggest of smiles :) I love you passionately.. love Brenda
4th Aug 2017 4:45am
all the tormented lust that a dominant lover provides;
these dark desires you've visited, Crim...
these dark desires you've visited, Crim...
4th Aug 2017 12:47pm
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 5:07am
Brenda.. you make poets wish they were that one.. luscious love.. dig it, my sister.. love you..
Dave
Dave
4th Aug 2017 12:48pm
thank you Dave for the love you've shown on this lusty write.. love you my brother.. Brenda
4th Aug 2017 5:28am
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4th Aug 2017 12:50pm
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 12:20pm
Well, I get to climb in a car and ride the vibrations for 5 hours now after reading this panty scorching write. You ratcheted up the HEAT in here, my lovely Dark Angel! Gonna be one helluva ride today for me now!
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
4th Aug 2017 12:51pm
thank you lovely one you gifted me with big smiles at your beautiful response :) love you lady.. Crim
4th Aug 2017 1:07pm
What the HELL!? Goddammit! Now how am I supposed to think clear this day, after this write?
.....Brenda and Taryn! You gals are XXXX XXXX GOOD LORD!
LOVE LOVE LOVE your gentle, rawness and genuine nature in your write. Makes the choice comparison between nakedness and the flesh behind leather and command.(personally)
Christopher
.....Brenda and Taryn! You gals are XXXX XXXX GOOD LORD!
LOVE LOVE LOVE your gentle, rawness and genuine nature in your write. Makes the choice comparison between nakedness and the flesh behind leather and command.(personally)
Christopher
7th Aug 2017 2:30pm
thank you graciously Christopher for an utterly fantastic comment :) love Brenda
4th Aug 2017 6:16pm
7th Aug 2017 2:30pm
5th Aug 2017 11:26am
you had me at "piss down my throat"
*sigh*
who said romance was dead ltm
absolutely fucking loved this beautiful one.
you are the queen of erotica
xo
*sigh*
who said romance was dead ltm
absolutely fucking loved this beautiful one.
you are the queen of erotica
xo
7th Aug 2017 2:31pm
thank you beautiful one I absolutely swoon every time you visit my pages leaving your thoughts :) love Brenda
