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Melted
She drifts along the rim
of my internal corona
freezing twinkling spheres
that fulgurate my initial
warmth,
her rawness blazes
like Ra's essence
I'm eclipsed by her glory.
Edacious is she
placating nectarous
onslaught of legerdemain
beckoning my kowtow,
with swift adherence
my stoicism dissipates
into abandonment.
I'm comatose from
hypnosis of this Grecian rose
harboring archaic dances
kaleidoscopic trances,
tantric titivating telepathy
immaculately dispersed,
galvanized deceptive harmony,
melting my cryogenic
repository of sleeping passion.
Copyright © 2017 Quietusquill.All Rights Reserved
of my internal corona
freezing twinkling spheres
that fulgurate my initial
warmth,
her rawness blazes
like Ra's essence
I'm eclipsed by her glory.
Edacious is she
placating nectarous
onslaught of legerdemain
beckoning my kowtow,
with swift adherence
my stoicism dissipates
into abandonment.
I'm comatose from
hypnosis of this Grecian rose
harboring archaic dances
kaleidoscopic trances,
tantric titivating telepathy
immaculately dispersed,
galvanized deceptive harmony,
melting my cryogenic
repository of sleeping passion.
Copyright © 2017 Quietusquill.All Rights Reserved
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Re. Melted
3rd Aug 2017 9:00pm
and into her you flow...molten to the core...an eruption, helplessly longing to
quench her soothing shore
quench her soothing shore
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Re: Re. Melted
3rd Aug 2017 9:07pm
Re. Melted
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 00:52am
Wow!! This is incredible! Well penned:)

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Re. Melted
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 4:08am
Q, those last three stanzas stole breath! A beautiful write penned here which stirred all within...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn

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4th Aug 2017 4:13am
Re. Melted
4th Aug 2017 11:55am
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4th Aug 2017 11:38pm
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Jun 2018 9:45pm
4th Aug 2017 11:56pm
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Re. Melted
16th Nov 2017 1:37am
Great flow in this one ... also nice alliteration as well. Plus such choice juicy words that tickle when whispered!
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16th Nov 2017 1:39am
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16th Nov 2017 1:40am
Yes you do. I love it when a poem comes to maturity before my eyes ... pure magic.
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