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When?
How
Many
More
Words
Does
It
Take
For
Something
To
Be
Recognized
As
Real
And
Not
An
Illness
Or
Point
Of
View?
How
Many
More
Poems
Or
Meet
Ups
Or
Sleepovers
Until
You
Recognize
That
There's
More
To
This
Agony
Than
What
Meets
Your
Eyes?
When
Will
The
Human
Race
Decide
To
Erase
The
Superficial
Ideals
And
Eradicate
Stigmas
Against
The
Vulnerable
And
Needy
Men
And
Women?
When?
Many
More
Words
Does
It
Take
For
Something
To
Be
Recognized
As
Real
And
Not
An
Illness
Or
Point
Of
View?
How
Many
More
Poems
Or
Meet
Ups
Or
Sleepovers
Until
You
Recognize
That
There's
More
To
This
Agony
Than
What
Meets
Your
Eyes?
When
Will
The
Human
Race
Decide
To
Erase
The
Superficial
Ideals
And
Eradicate
Stigmas
Against
The
Vulnerable
And
Needy
Men
And
Women?
When?
Published 2nd Aug 2017
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2nd Aug 2017 3:18am
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2017 5:17am
this is honestly so beautiful, and I love how you chose to use only one word per line as it makes it much more unique - happy writing!
2nd Aug 2017 9:02am
Birdie, thank you so much for your kind words, they're much appreciated! :)
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2017 5:23am
Fairy.. love the delivery.. kinda reminds me of me.. but still 100% proof you.. dig it.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
2nd Aug 2017 9:03am
Could've been a product of inspiration :) thank you for commenting Dave!
