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lily's deviant desires
i cry
vodka tears on your steel jaw
& you crack me open
reading my soul
it's all there on my face
sunshine glances
undulating devils
guile on my intoxicated lips
& you drink it up
cos you believe what you want
of this lady
that came down from the sun
lily in full bloom
you taste me
& get drunk on my disease
do or die we ride
in this life & the next
i the nexus
that brings you back for more
bow to your tainted Queen
you beat me down
just to build me up again
& i like it that way
i raise my rebellious head
spit on your holy cock
my lips curled in disdain
masochistic fuck
Sadistic whore
open the door of your choice
but know this
i won't bend easy
this bitch is hard to break
laugh as blood spills
from my razor tongue
i need you
damn it i fucking need you
i'm out of control
i burn with unsated pain
for more than just a man
Lucifer & God in one deity
speaks to the bad girl in me
i created him
of my own imaginations
cos only he can part the waters
of my deviant desires
enter the river Jordan
& baptize me in your jizz
ordain a new divinity
fuck me on your throne
& ejaculate deep inside
as i exhale falling stars
birthing a new race
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 30th Jul 2017
| Edited 31st Jul 2017
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30th Jul 2017 10:17pm
Fucking bad ass yeah hell yeah implosive caustic divinely defiant boom you got me with this one
"enter the river Jordan & baptize
me in your jizz
ordain a new divinity
fuck me on your throne
& ejaculate deep inside
as i exhale falling stars
birthing a new race"
That is the nectar and you are the hive banging write girl
👍🏼🌹🌹
"enter the river Jordan & baptize
me in your jizz
ordain a new divinity
fuck me on your throne
& ejaculate deep inside
as i exhale falling stars
birthing a new race"
That is the nectar and you are the hive banging write girl
👍🏼🌹🌹
1st Aug 2017 8:23am
thank you dearest Quiet One for such a bad ass comment gifting me many smiles :) love Crim
30th Jul 2017 10:44pm
HOLY HOLOCAUST! You rip me to shreds! Every. Single. Time.
XXXchristopherXXX
XXXchristopherXXX
1st Aug 2017 8:24am
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1st Aug 2017 8:25am
Anonymous
31st Jul 2017 4:24am
Wowzers Crime........mmmmmmmmmm........is all I can moan...........stunning sexy ink........purple luv & hugs xo :)
1st Aug 2017 8:25am
aw i'm blushing beautiful Flower I adore it made you feel this way :) love Crim
31st Jul 2017 7:59am
it goes from hardcore
to radiant poetry as you exhale falling stars, Crim...
to radiant poetry as you exhale falling stars, Crim...
1st Aug 2017 8:26am
Anonymous
31st Jul 2017 1:02pm
My Beautiful Brenda, saying it all in there perfectly....defiant and hard to break...you will always stay true to you...telling us of all and doing it while stealing our breaths with incredible poetry my love...
I love you deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
1st Aug 2017 8:27am
thank you my love for such a loving comment & for embracing who I am.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Anonymous
31st Jul 2017 2:42pm
I love the defiant "up yours" tone of this one, my beautiful Dark Angel. You fight back as only you can. Your gift of expression is an amazing thing, lovely one.
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
1st Aug 2017 8:29am
thank you lovely one for seeing the fierceness of this write & embracing me.. love you lady.. Crim
31st Jul 2017 5:23pm
staggering write, leaves me speechless yet at the same time excited. :-)
another masterful write :-) Hugs :-)
another masterful write :-) Hugs :-)
1st Aug 2017 8:29am
thank you David I'm so happy to have that response from you :) love & hugs Brenda
1st Aug 2017 3:38am
This really has punch especially the ending, it's a full on brave write that also seems to echo the mythical
' Lillith ' or Eve story somehow, it's great....
' Lillith ' or Eve story somehow, it's great....
thank you most graciously I suppose she could be Lilith & Eve in one persona.. love Crim
1st Aug 2017 7:14pm
brenda, beautiful one, you hooked me with those first two lines
& i have been snared right to the end,
held utterly captive by your hard metaphors
i loved this. best thing i've read on du in ages
xo
& i have been snared right to the end,
held utterly captive by your hard metaphors
i loved this. best thing i've read on du in ages
xo
1st Aug 2017 9:55pm
beautiful Katja my heart is deeply moved & humbled by your comment.. thank you dearest poetess you made my week.. love you lady.. Brenda
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 12:55pm
ok, this just made me get so damn warm and liquidy feeling,
no words,
f***k!
no words,
f***k!
4th Aug 2017 1:05pm
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