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Temporary
I slowly caress your scars
erase craters and volcanoes with fingertips
soft balm better than what invaded
underground rivers with poisonous relief
temporarily meandering your
valleys and gentle mountain slopes
Until above your head
bubbles with unheard words
capture floating colours
more exuberant than
paintings in purple
of tornadoes
and you
erupt
erase craters and volcanoes with fingertips
soft balm better than what invaded
underground rivers with poisonous relief
temporarily meandering your
valleys and gentle mountain slopes
Until above your head
bubbles with unheard words
capture floating colours
more exuberant than
paintings in purple
of tornadoes
and you
erupt
Published 29th Jul 2017
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
29th Jul 2017 12:59pm
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29th Jul 2017 1:30pm
Beauty personified my friend. Love how you created this. You have painted a story in my mind.
Anonymous
29th Jul 2017 2:11pm
I like how it looks like a tornado!
Anonymous
31st Jul 2017 1:47pm
I love how your poem reads so beautifully and it visually resembles an eruption. It was an amazing use of word and layout.
