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Anatomy of a Critique

can be that of Human design;              
a cleft palate of birth-defect              
needing specialized attention
 
Perhaps born perfectly healthy;
Imagery peaches and cream, ten
Metaphors and Flow all wiggling
 
Yet. . .somewhere along the Verse
meaning faltered, contracted disease
warranting reconstructive Syntax
 
Or perhaps became an amputee
injured during emotional conflict
requiring a prosthetic of Words
 
The Anatomy of a Critique
isn't all flaws and suggested
improvements
; it's Ancient:
 
an Art form of deep Sentiment
learning new methods of getting
ideas across
through Poetry
 
It's newfound Hope to wounded
an Advocate for Understanding;
Champion of Communication
 
Preserved for Future generations              
~              
             
             
             
Italics by JohnnyBlaze, my Best Friend and constant source of Love & Inspiration ❤
Written by Ahavati (Tams)
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