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A Loss for Words
Bereft of fresh ideas
Fumbling to find amusement
A razor-sporting femme fatale
A merc of dead intent
Lascivious games and sudden shames
And countless shades of red
Or a little something for the head
Certain slants of subtlety
Arcane thoughts and complex plots
Solemn muses in a row
Still waiting for some guiding light
Some burst of reason and delight
Some concept I can truly use
So come on, babe, and light my fuse...
Fumbling to find amusement
A razor-sporting femme fatale
A merc of dead intent
Lascivious games and sudden shames
And countless shades of red
Or a little something for the head
Certain slants of subtlety
Arcane thoughts and complex plots
Solemn muses in a row
Still waiting for some guiding light
Some burst of reason and delight
Some concept I can truly use
So come on, babe, and light my fuse...
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Re. A Loss for Words
26th Jul 2017 6:51pm
ha! i hear ya, mister... muse seems to be giving me the silent treatment too... treacherous bitch
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Re: Re. A Loss for Words
26th Jul 2017 9:25pm
Re. A Loss for Words
26th Jul 2017 9:51pm
Wow this one is excellent! Countless shades of red ... Also love the flow of crisp words: Bereft, merc, lascivious, slant, arcane. "light my fuse" - perfect ending.
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Re: Re. A Loss for Words
27th Jul 2017 6:31pm
Thank you LilDragonFly! I try to keep it flowing, maybe establish some rhythm. Sometimes it works, sometimes is doesn't...
Re. A Loss for Words
Mo Chara...this one hits hard for me, too.
It seemed as though my number one muse had become over-worked, so i graciously offered her a short vacation---appears as though she has cashed in the round-trip ticket, and her last whereabouts remains unknown! The other two walked out on strike...protesting lack of equal benefits! (Guess it might be time to start posting on Craig"s List..or, in the Employment Opportunities section of Muse Monthly :/
So appreciated the sentiment in your scribe!
It seemed as though my number one muse had become over-worked, so i graciously offered her a short vacation---appears as though she has cashed in the round-trip ticket, and her last whereabouts remains unknown! The other two walked out on strike...protesting lack of equal benefits! (Guess it might be time to start posting on Craig"s List..or, in the Employment Opportunities section of Muse Monthly :/
So appreciated the sentiment in your scribe!
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Re: Re. A Loss for Words
27th Jul 2017 6:37pm
The Muse Union has become so well organized that their demands are usually met. Thank you for the fine and funny comment DarkEnchantress!
Re. A Loss for Words
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jul 2017 10:36pm
26th Jul 2017 10:34pm
Oh, my ...
I`m going to nominate this
for Sept`s comp!
Vivid imagery &
the weave of words
give this piece
so much depth.
Sir Fly, so fly ... ~ Dev
I`m going to nominate this
for Sept`s comp!
Vivid imagery &
the weave of words
give this piece
so much depth.
Sir Fly, so fly ... ~ Dev

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Re: Re. A Loss for Words
27th Jul 2017 6:44pm
Re. A Loss for Words
Anonymous
27th Jul 2017 00:07am
My Lovely Sir Crow, I too was tormented with this bitch recently, she still lingers a bit, but I shall wait patiently for my muse to return full force...it's impossible for it not to, not when words are our release....excellent ink! I love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo

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Re: Re. A Loss for Words
27th Jul 2017 6:33pm
I suspect the loss is temporary. My muse is probably down at the local bar, drowning my sorrows. I'll give her another half hour...
Re. A Loss for Words
27th Jul 2017 2:55am
You seem to have plenty of ideas here - fresh ones and otherwise - well done
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Re: Re. A Loss for Words
27th Jul 2017 6:45pm
Re: Re. A Loss for Words
30th Jul 2017 12:09pm
I meant fresh as in sassy and did not mean for you to infer stale in otherwise - smiles
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Re. A Loss for Words
27th Jul 2017 3:42am
Hey Crow......BRAVO!! Reading I don't think she's too far away......brilliant ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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27th Jul 2017 6:46pm
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