Betrayals

oh my gosh! and why did you have to make it so beautifully pretty?

i hate deception..this was painful as i got lost in the beauty of it,
not wanting to accept the betrayal ..lol,, so not funny



OK, Dejure dear,  
you are a master !! this was so creatively profound and fundamentally  
essential to a humanistic concept and we may deal with such experiences..

thank you so much :) I tried to make it as abstract as possible. ;) this one at least it visually doesn't convey the hidden pain. like how we pretend sometimes, in a situation like this. showing an ego saying you're ok. hiding the pain, blaming any one for the pain inside. Poet Read poems by dejure

i think youve perfected that here, ;)

Vick, while this is a beautiful poem and design, I did have to enlarge to read it ( and I don't need reading glasses ).  I think it would be so much easier with a bit of darker font ( or even a darker blue shadowline.

Again, beautiful poem and design; but, I felt I owed you honesty.

thank you so much Ahavati..!

I know the small text is kinda thin to read :)

damn it dearest Vick it's that last
I still love you that really packs a punch
love is never easy it hurts so often
that you still have love in your heart for this person is beautiful
because I guess in the end our heart's love who they do no matter what
it doesn't just go away just like that...

I love this I have tears in my eyes...

love Brenda ❤

Aww thank you so much Brenda,

glad you liked it :)