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carbon cycle
a million years late
matters not
the time
has come
let's go
home
whilst
this form
lasts
our journey
is stored
in our
atomic memory
before
we depart
and meet again
after
the next big-bang
in time
space dust
is you
is me
Published 24th Jul 2017
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If time and space are infinite and ever expanding,
then home is fleeting, evolving,
a destination never to be reached
on a unending journey.
then home is fleeting, evolving,
a destination never to be reached
on a unending journey.
25th Jul 2017 2:28am
time
is limited
for its time would come
when it all returns
to where it began
nothing
is forever
same goes
for expansion
yet soul
is
dimension another
home
where the soul(s) reside.
peer and views
appreciated.
is limited
for its time would come
when it all returns
to where it began
nothing
is forever
same goes
for expansion
yet soul
is
dimension another
home
where the soul(s) reside.
peer and views
appreciated.
25th Jul 2017 5:37am
Home... is where the heart resides.
There is much to be said about souls that gravitate towards one another, time & time again. Irrespective, of time, place & circumstance.
Such is the gravitational pull of twin souls... 👑😎🎈🌞🌷
There is much to be said about souls that gravitate towards one another, time & time again. Irrespective, of time, place & circumstance.
Such is the gravitational pull of twin souls... 👑😎🎈🌞🌷
28th Jul 2017 10:48am
true.
home is where the heart(s) reside.
appreciation
of the poet's comments and
wisdom
both are held close
"gravitational pull of twin souls" - gist of the poem in one line.
home is where the heart(s) reside.
appreciation
of the poet's comments and
wisdom
both are held close
"gravitational pull of twin souls" - gist of the poem in one line.
25th Jul 2017 6:40am
Love the sense of time an infinity displayed here, the constant cycle to return to those kindred spirits. Great pen.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
28th Jul 2017 10:50am
a shadow
of a friend
in never a pariah one
despite what they claim.
appreciation
is held dear
of both
the visit and
insight.
of a friend
in never a pariah one
despite what they claim.
appreciation
is held dear
of both
the visit and
insight.
