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I Walk On
Last hints of light lay down
gasping in the night
reaching for a touch
a comfort loved so much
I walk on
where darkness plays her song
fearing what went wrong
too fast and way too strong
No excuses no regrets
one gives and then one gets
no others laying claim
in love there is no shame
The light lays down
and I walk on
gasping in the night
reaching for a touch
a comfort loved so much
I walk on
where darkness plays her song
fearing what went wrong
too fast and way too strong
No excuses no regrets
one gives and then one gets
no others laying claim
in love there is no shame
The light lays down
and I walk on
Published 19th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
20th Jul 2017 00:25am
"in love there is no shame" - this is the raw and honest truth. Your thoughts are great.
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Jul 2017 8:36am
20th Jul 2017 8:34am
to where? this sounds a bit challenging, what if you
need the strength of softness, nourishment or anything,
while you're wandering?
just dont become dehydrated, because we need your ample sensuality..
need the strength of softness, nourishment or anything,
while you're wandering?
just dont become dehydrated, because we need your ample sensuality..
Anonymous
20th Jul 2017 1:45pm
I'm left with the question is this a good walk? Where will it take you? It's a beautiful write, Tim
Anonymous
20th Jul 2017 5:42pm
Fantastic !
22nd Jul 2017 4:11pm
"Where darkness plays her song" ... LOVE this. Also the last stanza as well. I also am left with so many questions, but also the fear that they may be no answers. Beautiful.
24th Jul 2017 00:02am
24th Jul 2017 3:25pm
Sometimes the walk is long until we find the right resting place, in the arms of love.
