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Nothing More
Swing your axe
Hack away at my soul
Belittle, degrade
Tear me apart
Tell me what you think of me
Wield your dagger
Drag it through my skin
Bitch, slut, whore
Show me who I am
Carve it deep; make it bleed
Pack it with salt
And hear my screams
Now to your knees
Where you can grovel and beg
Spew your toxic apologies
Win me over with your tears
Brainwash me with your touch
Persuade me with your caress
But watch your step
Because I've already begun to realize
I'm better without you; and
You're really nothing more than a good fuck
Hack away at my soul
Belittle, degrade
Tear me apart
Tell me what you think of me
Wield your dagger
Drag it through my skin
Bitch, slut, whore
Show me who I am
Carve it deep; make it bleed
Pack it with salt
And hear my screams
Now to your knees
Where you can grovel and beg
Spew your toxic apologies
Win me over with your tears
Brainwash me with your touch
Persuade me with your caress
But watch your step
Because I've already begun to realize
I'm better without you; and
You're really nothing more than a good fuck
Published 18th Jul 2017
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18th Jul 2017 8:05pm
18th Jul 2017 9:04pm
Yes, it sure can be difficult to find a good fuck. I often wonder if that's the only reason I keep hanging around. Lol
28th Jul 2017 7:16pm
In a good fuck ,two equal swimmers swim .Once in a blue moon it happens . Yes -to find a partner to mitigate the wild is a rare chance
19th Jul 2017 3:29pm
Anonymous
19th Jul 2017 7:29pm
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28th Jul 2017 7:13pm
Sex tolls ,attains climax ,and then fades the glow and vigor .Love was not there , but an erotic relief . The woman knows that her allotted time is gone . Well written . The psychology of a sex seller is well wrought
28th Jan 2018 1:14pm
30th Jan 2018 10:05pm
Oh my! This one packs quite a punch. No one deserves so much pain in a relationship. The end is a perfect belittling reserved for callous monsters. Brava!
Anonymous
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7th Dec 2018 3:21am
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31st Jan 2019 12:33pm
Beautiful words to describe such confusion and pain.
Totally resonates with me, I've been in this confusing situation more than once!
Lust does not equal or ever come close to replicating love, or so I am told and choose to believe...
Totally resonates with me, I've been in this confusing situation more than once!
Lust does not equal or ever come close to replicating love, or so I am told and choose to believe...
7th Feb 2019 9:28am
Anonymous
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2nd Apr 2019 7:43am
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10th Apr 2019 00:49am
Love's journey to detachment; an arrangement. Once the bond is broken, it almost never gets mended.
Very astute observation and pen.
Very astute observation and pen.
17th May 2019 2:14am
27th Jul 2019 2:20pm
pocketfullofroses, A Good Fuck is Not only Special to Find BUT Even Better To Try Over and Over. Something Else As Good is Explained in my Personal Story Whip Cream Dessert. I Hope You Will Read It and Comment. Joe
8th May 2022 4:50am
this has an interesting dimension if it is written to one's muse
a warm smile
silent lotus
a warm smile
silent lotus
25th May 2022 2:04pm
Hello P,
What a frustration, anger and realization. The good thing is you didn't surrender to a good fuck. I love the starting with utmost anger and then it soothes down and awakening happens. Great work. Love to read you more.
Hugs,
KS
What a frustration, anger and realization. The good thing is you didn't surrender to a good fuck. I love the starting with utmost anger and then it soothes down and awakening happens. Great work. Love to read you more.
Hugs,
KS
Anonymous
17th Apr 2023 1:32am
Love the penmen's ship here and realizing what it really is. At least you're upfront and aware. I love it.
29th May 2023 1:22pm
22nd Jun 2023 3:34am
It best to move and find a man who treats you with Kindness and Respect. A man should treat you like a Queen. Keep on writing.
31st Jul 2023 12:18pm
