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Cream Pie
Theres nothing more beautiful than showing the one you love how much you adore them as they leave you breathless, and uncomposed, whilst humming upon their hard cock.
The miracle of such blessings can be found upon your soft lips as I take the time to pay reverence to your existence, until we're both tingling from the crown down, and floating upon cloud nine while you ponder the aftermath associated with the way you blow my mind, time and time again.
Freedom is found in the way you leave me gaping and aching for more as you learn the art of chartering the shifting tides within my oceanic being, whilst making me cycle up and down your hard cock.
The masochist within me is devout like a pious, sprawled across the altar of your divine purpose as you pinch and pull upon my hardened nipples that rise for you, before tempering them with warm soothing kisses as you leave me quivering with an arched back, and bathing in the warmth of our orgasmic bliss.
The heat of your staggered breath as it mingles all over my flesh tells me that you're hungry as I ride you harder and deeper, relentlessly and ravenously, until the taste of your sweet ambrosia drips from my quivering bare lips.
And if infinity and immortality doesn't bless us graciously upon the intersection of loves apex, I'm not sure what will, save the twilight hours in which I pay homage to your existence while sipping upon the essence of memories yet to be made, like the way you indulge yourself in my bare cunt whilst I'm sprawled out in front of you, with a freshly made cream pie.
The miracle of such blessings can be found upon your soft lips as I take the time to pay reverence to your existence, until we're both tingling from the crown down, and floating upon cloud nine while you ponder the aftermath associated with the way you blow my mind, time and time again.
Freedom is found in the way you leave me gaping and aching for more as you learn the art of chartering the shifting tides within my oceanic being, whilst making me cycle up and down your hard cock.
The masochist within me is devout like a pious, sprawled across the altar of your divine purpose as you pinch and pull upon my hardened nipples that rise for you, before tempering them with warm soothing kisses as you leave me quivering with an arched back, and bathing in the warmth of our orgasmic bliss.
The heat of your staggered breath as it mingles all over my flesh tells me that you're hungry as I ride you harder and deeper, relentlessly and ravenously, until the taste of your sweet ambrosia drips from my quivering bare lips.
And if infinity and immortality doesn't bless us graciously upon the intersection of loves apex, I'm not sure what will, save the twilight hours in which I pay homage to your existence while sipping upon the essence of memories yet to be made, like the way you indulge yourself in my bare cunt whilst I'm sprawled out in front of you, with a freshly made cream pie.
Published 18th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2017 5:38pm
Indulging myself in the write for certain !!!!
Anonymous
18th Jul 2017 5:44pm
wowzers, this is super hot, i can visualize the whole scene and you kept it highly erotic with class and eloquence.
I have come to have such low expectations of erotica due to the fact that people have written it like a step by step guide with all the obvious words/wording but once in a while something like your work i come across appreciating a well written piece.
Couple of areas i noted that you can omit, stanza 4 and 5, using simile 'as' more than needed. Like in 4S you can get rid of the second one and in 5S you really don't need it.
I have come to have such low expectations of erotica due to the fact that people have written it like a step by step guide with all the obvious words/wording but once in a while something like your work i come across appreciating a well written piece.
Couple of areas i noted that you can omit, stanza 4 and 5, using simile 'as' more than needed. Like in 4S you can get rid of the second one and in 5S you really don't need it.
Anonymous
18th Jul 2017 5:53pm
"And if infinity and immortality doesn't bless us graciously upon the intersection of loves apex, I'm not sure what will,"
damn!!!!! 'nuff said
damn!!!!! 'nuff said
18th Jul 2017 5:54pm
I love the elegance and eloquence you bring to your eroticism, and I'm impressed with how each stanza (or paragraph?) is one long, compelling sentence. Fine work!
18th Jul 2017 6:11pm
18th Jul 2017 11:35pm
"you learn the art of chartering the shifting tides within my oceanic being," awesome!
Anonymous
19th Jul 2017 00:42am
i think it's perfect actually
20th Jul 2017 8:04am
