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in memorium
when
the threshold
was past
a poem
i penned
and
called it
upbeat
the void
though empty
yet housing
the cold
i called it
the heat
past
my passing
she heard
the story
and said
repeat
A cold_fusion original. 16/07/2017.
Published 16th Jul 2017
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18th Jul 2017 9:47am
I like this, I like this a lot. The flow and simplicity are outstanding, yet, it is very complex. Expertly penned.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
18th Jul 2017 12:32pm
not that complex
for poets
with depth
and insight
as the one who complimented here.
appreciation is held close. so is the visit.
for poets
with depth
and insight
as the one who complimented here.
appreciation is held close. so is the visit.
22nd Jul 2017 6:03am
22nd Jul 2017 4:02pm
