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A Nice Walk
I came in from outdoors
A nice walk I took
She asked me
If the sun was shining
To tell the truth
I hadn't paid any mind to the weather
Still, she expects an answer
And if it isn't the right one
She'll think me utterly mad
İMay 17, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
A nice walk I took
She asked me
If the sun was shining
To tell the truth
I hadn't paid any mind to the weather
Still, she expects an answer
And if it isn't the right one
She'll think me utterly mad
İMay 17, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Published 11th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2017 4:05am
Hey Jerry.......I luv that you're my personal weather man......you're right more than the ones here......LOL!! Enjoyed this ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Well, thank you my Sweet Friend . . . Many times the weathermen on TV likes to analysis the weather more than actually telling you what exactly is going on with it.
Anonymous
13th Jul 2017 2:49pm
I can read this in a couple different ways my friend, especially when I focus on these two lines..
"Still, she expects an answer
And if it isn't the right one"
~ I wonder if my thought processes are walking the right path ;)
xoxo Taryn
"Still, she expects an answer
And if it isn't the right one"
~ I wonder if my thought processes are walking the right path ;)
xoxo Taryn
13th Jul 2017 8:02pm
I am not sure if you are on the right path or not, Taryn. Thank you for being here today.
