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Re. Illusions
Re: Re. Illusions
22nd Jul 2017 4:52pm
Re. Illusions
Anonymous
10th Jul 2017 3:37am
Ouch! love can't always be wine and roses, sometimes it hurts like hell.
So glad to see your presence Miss Chi your wisdom and sharp pen is dearly missed.
So glad to see your presence Miss Chi your wisdom and sharp pen is dearly missed.
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Re: Re. Illusions
22nd Jul 2017 4:55pm
You're so sweet, Rina! Thank you for always knowing what I mean and how to encrypt my words! Your precious pen and presence here is one of the reasons for staying at DU ...
Re. Illusions
10th Jul 2017 3:52am
First three lines bring to mind the role of a mother. The last brings to mind " Consider Me Gone", by Sting. (No pun intended)
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Hi Jazz! Thanks for your nice comment! It's just three lines (haiku) if you don't count the headline :-). It's nice to see you again :-)!
Re: Re. Illusions
24th Jul 2017 1:45am
The way it came out when I saw it, "hearts", didn't make it on the second line. It was by itself on the third line.
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Re. Illusions
10th Jul 2017 6:16am
Re: Re. Illusions
22nd Jul 2017 5:09pm
I think at least a rose stands for beauty and pain, for love and withering ... You just gave me more inspiration! Thank you, JohnFeddeler for your fine comment!
Re. Illusions
13th Jul 2017 00:28am
One of the things I wish life didn't bring "better to love and lost than not loved....my ass!!!!"
Excellent Delivery Kidd-O!!!
Excellent Delivery Kidd-O!!!
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No joy, no pain. No pain, no poem! I'm more creative when I suffer. And you?
Thanks a lot, by the way :-). Your comments make me happy!
Thanks a lot, by the way :-). Your comments make me happy!
Re: Re. Illusions
23rd Jul 2017 1:21am
You know...honestly... When I am depressed or upset...I crumple and fold.... When I am happy and top of the world, I can Write spontaneously for hours if pushed to do it. This covers, good vibe Writes, dark Writes or sad Writes...I can connect easily to the energy I wish to project. But once I am upset....it is a dark hole and it's like a lock is put on my creative mind. Really love seeing You Here -Makes me quite happy!!!
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Re. Illusions
Anonymous
29th Aug 2017 7:52pm
Excellent!!
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