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Communiqué
They say Love isn't Words
but what you do instead
For the most part, it's True
bout actions, I 'spose
Especially in human form
but it goes beyond that
I've learned it's a Frequency
a Vibrational Communiqué
Transmitting from a humble
Source of inner Love
To remind us ( just in case
we'd forgotten );
"You're not alone."
but what you do instead
For the most part, it's True
bout actions, I 'spose
Especially in human form
but it goes beyond that
I've learned it's a Frequency
a Vibrational Communiqué
Transmitting from a humble
Source of inner Love
To remind us ( just in case
we'd forgotten );
"You're not alone."
Published 7th Jul 2017
| Edited 11th Jul 2017
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7th Jul 2017 10:55pm
7th Jul 2017 11:05pm
Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 11:07pm
you have my heart, mind and lungs and soul, all over the place
ricocheting into each other
beautiful otherly being
ricocheting into each other
beautiful otherly being
8th Jul 2017 2:01am
beautiful and thought provoking - sadly what love is is too easily forgotten :-(
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
8th Jul 2017 10:33pm
9th Jul 2017 10:34am
oddly, i've never been more alone
than when i was in love
i'll hang on to this tho
(just in case)
xo
than when i was in love
i'll hang on to this tho
(just in case)
xo
9th Jul 2017 8:19pm
Anonymous
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10th Jul 2017 00:46am
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11th Jul 2017 2:37am
The use of capitals is a bit confusing to me, but the poem flows really well and has a quality of wholeness where it doesn't feel like you've said too much or missed anything out. It also has a sophisticated sense of mystery and spirituality which is what I most love about it.
11th Jul 2017 3:04am
I agree about the caps; there were a few I'd completely missed. They've been corrected. Thank you for the secondary observations and RL Honor.
13th Jul 2017 12:27pm
13th Jul 2017 4:42pm
13th Jul 2017 8:58pm
Cool sentiment, well writ..... but
eye
beg
to differ on the basic pre'miss......
apparently some of us become 'untouchables' after
a while (despite the poster-boy Nice Guy i been all my life).......but then someone says "it's your own fault", so,
y'jus'gotta say "g'odd bless you", & shut thfuck up on the topic.
Ol'bastard's always raining on someone's parade...gets what he de-serves.
eye
beg
to differ on the basic pre'miss......
apparently some of us become 'untouchables' after
a while (despite the poster-boy Nice Guy i been all my life).......but then someone says "it's your own fault", so,
y'jus'gotta say "g'odd bless you", & shut thfuck up on the topic.
Ol'bastard's always raining on someone's parade...gets what he de-serves.
One doesn't have to be toucheable physically to realize they're not alone, Danielson. It's not about our physical reality or human companionship. It's about the Universe maneuvering messages into place.
It's reading a poem, written by a poet you've never heard of or read before, addressing the same thing you're contemplating in your heart at the very second you're contemplating it.
It's that song, out of billions that could've been played at that moment, that maybe you haven't heard since childhood, or highschool, or never before hearing it at that exact moment, realizing it's speaking to you.
It's the stranger or friend or neighbor saying something you needed to hear. It's a quote you hear or see, or maybe a social networking post confirming something you were considering.
Or it's a voice coming out of the darkness reciting in the resonant frequency of your own.
There's a million permutations of reminders that you're not alone, and not one has to do with human touch. I should know, because it's exactly what this poem is about.
That despite how lonely you are or have been, or what you're missing in your life ( or feel you're missing ), there's always hope in the answers and signs that we're not alone.
Sometimes the Universe deals you a winning hand after you learn the contrast of its opposite. I mean think about it, would you give someone a gift knowing they wouldn't appreciate it?
It's reading a poem, written by a poet you've never heard of or read before, addressing the same thing you're contemplating in your heart at the very second you're contemplating it.
It's that song, out of billions that could've been played at that moment, that maybe you haven't heard since childhood, or highschool, or never before hearing it at that exact moment, realizing it's speaking to you.
It's the stranger or friend or neighbor saying something you needed to hear. It's a quote you hear or see, or maybe a social networking post confirming something you were considering.
Or it's a voice coming out of the darkness reciting in the resonant frequency of your own.
There's a million permutations of reminders that you're not alone, and not one has to do with human touch. I should know, because it's exactly what this poem is about.
That despite how lonely you are or have been, or what you're missing in your life ( or feel you're missing ), there's always hope in the answers and signs that we're not alone.
Sometimes the Universe deals you a winning hand after you learn the contrast of its opposite. I mean think about it, would you give someone a gift knowing they wouldn't appreciate it?
15th Jul 2017 5:31am
eye see pretty much all you say here, but we's rarely have any idear what we's talkin'bout outside of this framework of ersatz 'reality' we's trapped in, & thus, keep "making things up" (aka:" beliefs") to keep thee Ego "in the know", tho vapid & ephemeral it be.
This is why I allow my feelings vs thoughts to be my compass ( not saying I don't use reason and logic ).
Just as we imagine things to believe outside this suit of flesh to keep us in belief, we can also deny there's anything beyond it by virtue of hopelessness. Something I hope I never experience. Or anyone I know.
Just as we imagine things to believe outside this suit of flesh to keep us in belief, we can also deny there's anything beyond it by virtue of hopelessness. Something I hope I never experience. Or anyone I know.
16th Jul 2017 9:35pm
in "my case" hopelessness (&hope) are irrelevant to any overriding Truth (which we'll never know anyway due to our egocentric interpretivism cluttering 'reality' out of eXistence)........but, for all practical porpoises, i'll admit that it's probably some kind of brain-damage "on my part". Bless ye, Tam.
Anonymous
15th Jul 2017 00:16am
**bows reverently**
I love your voice in this write, perfect phrasing and word choice but more importantly the insipiring message within.
Damn near perfect.
B
I love your voice in this write, perfect phrasing and word choice but more importantly the insipiring message within.
Damn near perfect.
B
15th Jul 2017 1:36am
I don't know that I've ever had anyone bow reverently, mouse. Or say "Damn near perfect." So I thank you kindly for that.
