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To The Moon
I love your beams,
Your shimmer and shine.
I love your waves;
you push the tides
with your wane,
casting your reflection
upon our Ocean tides.
I love your fullness
and your curves are so divine.
I love your dusty ways,
I find you beautiful, mysterious,
elegant, and callus
in your concrete state of change.
To the moon,
I have confessed
my darkest fears,
You never laughed
nor judged me,
You always lent me your ear.
You listened to my poetry,
without biasing;
you took no attempt
to change my formatting
to conform to your comfort
and perfection.
You are a poem,
waiting to be written.
Ode to your beautiful format,
your haiku breathes heavily upon
my sky, reminding me to keep writing.
To the moon and back.
© 2017 AutisticPoet
Your shimmer and shine.
I love your waves;
you push the tides
with your wane,
casting your reflection
upon our Ocean tides.
I love your fullness
and your curves are so divine.
I love your dusty ways,
I find you beautiful, mysterious,
elegant, and callus
in your concrete state of change.
To the moon,
I have confessed
my darkest fears,
You never laughed
nor judged me,
You always lent me your ear.
You listened to my poetry,
without biasing;
you took no attempt
to change my formatting
to conform to your comfort
and perfection.
You are a poem,
waiting to be written.
Ode to your beautiful format,
your haiku breathes heavily upon
my sky, reminding me to keep writing.
To the moon and back.
© 2017 AutisticPoet
Published 4th Jul 2017
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5th Jul 2017 4:47am
8th Jul 2017 7:43pm
Anonymous
6th Jul 2017 8:42pm
Good stuff !
Welcome to DUP.
Welcome to DUP.
8th Jul 2017 7:44pm
Anonymous
6th Sep 2017 1:47am
I am waiting for your moon haiku now that you've said that. lol. ;-) Nice poem. I could feel the cold desolate dusty still moon in your words as if I were looking through some binoculars. (I do not own a telescope you see.)
7th Sep 2017 3:36pm
That's what is so great about writing. You can use anything to view the stars, you just need to imagine it. I once fell from the sky, only to be awakened by the fall. I opened my eyes to find my bedroom wall's where there the whole time. Dreamers can imagine, but writer's can imagine and relate to the dreamers. That's why we write and read. Inspiration is the key to imagining great things.
Anonymous
7th Sep 2017 5:52pm
It is indeed. I seem to have a lack of inspiration at the momment. :-(
8th Sep 2017 6:00pm
Usually when I am lacking inspiration I read a lot. Also I take breaks and come back to my project when I feel inspired. I haven't ever had writers block because I take breaks and I try to find inspiration in thing's I normally would not. I also like to challenge myself by changing formats once in awhile. I recommend you read poetry blogs. You can find some by searching the web. If you like a certain type or format you can add it to your search. I have found lots of inspiration by researching. I use to go to the library and read all kinds of books. I would come home with so many ideas that I ended up buying a note pad so I can scribble down my ideas. I hope this helps you to find inspiration.
Anonymous
9th Sep 2017 00:21am
Hmmm, maybe. Thank you Poet. :-)
