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Brand New
When did you steal my heart
I think you know the truth
I need to get back that feeling
Like flying high above the moon
In silence I hear the message
And if you hear it too
I think you can capture it
In this I do believe it’s true
I always try to send my love
But sometimes sneaking out of the blue
Those feelings of water in rushing falls
My name in different hues
To give to you my heart’s castle wall
Your love to me is brand new
I think you know the truth
I need to get back that feeling
Like flying high above the moon
In silence I hear the message
And if you hear it too
I think you can capture it
In this I do believe it’s true
I always try to send my love
But sometimes sneaking out of the blue
Those feelings of water in rushing falls
My name in different hues
To give to you my heart’s castle wall
Your love to me is brand new
Published 24th Jun 2017
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Anonymous
24th Jun 2017 4:16pm
This is really good !!
24th Jun 2017 4:33pm
24th Jun 2017 4:17pm
24th Jun 2017 4:34pm
Thanks JusTim - I love that you used the word enchanting - one of my favorite words to hear. :)
25th Jun 2017 5:15pm
I get it, nice write
The castle wall was just to allure me to the many different shades of colors in the mist of the falls. Revealed happiness, surrendered to the silence. Locked away affections to be rediscovered by the pirates of our soul, like first mates that will always be
The castle wall was just to allure me to the many different shades of colors in the mist of the falls. Revealed happiness, surrendered to the silence. Locked away affections to be rediscovered by the pirates of our soul, like first mates that will always be
25th Jun 2017 6:33pm
