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LAST ONE OUT
Locked in this cave i couldn't stay
So I ran away
i need another day just one day
the others aren't me
so they can't see
that i needed to live
that i needed to breathe
so i pushed and i shoved until i knew i had a chance
then i noticed him running too
i wanted to give him my energy to help him leave
he had a better chance
he had a striders stance
as i saw him leave i slipped
as i tripped and my head hit the ground i saw him turn around
but all he saw was the remnants of the fall
So I ran away
i need another day just one day
the others aren't me
so they can't see
that i needed to live
that i needed to breathe
so i pushed and i shoved until i knew i had a chance
then i noticed him running too
i wanted to give him my energy to help him leave
he had a better chance
he had a striders stance
as i saw him leave i slipped
as i tripped and my head hit the ground i saw him turn around
but all he saw was the remnants of the fall
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