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Sweet...
.
And he said "sweet...
Said two more words
Before he spoke no more
His thoughts dancing
like mine
playing on what he was seeing
After saying "sweet..
Two other words
before taken with travelling
And he said "sweet...
Said two more words
Before he spoke no more
His thoughts dancing
like mine
playing on what he was seeing
After saying "sweet..
Two other words
before taken with travelling
Published 16th Jun 2017
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2017 6:53pm
How many different two word combos I'm coming up with to follow that "sweet..."...bringing me grins Rose...as always!!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
16th Jun 2017 7:56pm
16th Jun 2017 7:39pm
Leaving the reader to choose which two words for their comfort....
ever so thoughtful.
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ever so thoughtful.
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16th Jun 2017 7:58pm
Yes indeed Let the reader decide what best suits their imaginative mind XD
