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if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
it's not the fucking up
of the expected
like the fucked up day
when the prom got cancelled
or when the chick said NO
to the proposal
enjoy it pal
for THIS is
l i f e
and if possible
kick ya own butt
in joy
for ya are alive!
not everything leaves life
when you expect it the least
like life itself
it leaves the body
exactly when ya don't want to
like before
one last coital
one last sip
one last dip
so be glad
not mad
what ya had
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Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
11th Jun 2017 00:34am
Re: Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
12th Jun 2017 11:20am
Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
11th Jun 2017 00:34am
bet when I die
the phone is ringing
and I'm just going out
and I really meant
to do something ..
the phone is ringing
and I'm just going out
and I really meant
to do something ..
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Re: Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
12th Jun 2017 11:23am
yes, we all meant to do something, really do... man, even ya comments are little nuggets. TQ pal Paul! respect
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Re: Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
Melia, ma sistah! yuppp.. so freakin true, but as humans we cherish only when it's gone. luv ya ma lady. A cherish ya luv so am not missin somethin special while its here am i? :-) :-)
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12th Jun 2017 11:42am
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Re: Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
12th Jun 2017 11:53am
Lady Melia, dats exactly the problem, we whine, we cry, we even decry, the sitaution as some kinda piss rainin' on us all da time, and give a few years, we turn back n say, whoa, wish dat sweet old times come back. a say fuck ya man, live the moment ya got, not the one ya ain't nevva gonna get back. i'll take dat cherry and dip it on dis whipped cream atop ma cheesecake. TQ Sistahh. luv ya
Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
11th Jun 2017 9:33am
walker, dearest one,
i grow more & more enamored with your pen
& the wisdom that lies twixt the whimsy
of your form & syntax
you are marianna trench shallow ;-)
~ katerina
i grow more & more enamored with your pen
& the wisdom that lies twixt the whimsy
of your form & syntax
you are marianna trench shallow ;-)
~ katerina
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Re: Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
Спасибо, моя леди! ты заставляешь меня улыбаться!
I wish I had, even a fraction of your IQ Так что я могу по-настоящему оценить ваши особые стихи
you buried me under that mariana trench with the burden of ya affeccione ma lady.
a write a shoot from ma head. sometimes too late, but if i hold back, process to suit others then am not original and true am i? so ya get what ya get that is, odd sytaxed poems. a know ya praised ma work, a loved it, just sayin da reason for it bein like dat. люблю тебя ходунки
I wish I had, even a fraction of your IQ Так что я могу по-настоящему оценить ваши особые стихи
you buried me under that mariana trench with the burden of ya affeccione ma lady.
a write a shoot from ma head. sometimes too late, but if i hold back, process to suit others then am not original and true am i? so ya get what ya get that is, odd sytaxed poems. a know ya praised ma work, a loved it, just sayin da reason for it bein like dat. люблю тебя ходунки
Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
11th Jun 2017 8:33pm
not sure I agree - sometimes death is a blessed release - is better than life
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
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Re: Re. if everything happened as expected, life woud be fucked up
12th Jun 2017 11:33am
but pal David, am prettty sure, a agree wid ya, sometimes, death is a sweet release. well, only wid a promise of heaven a say. TQ for seein ma ink as excellent wid ya excellent eyes ma pal. Luv ya, respects Walker