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She / He

She found out through a slip of the tounge/
He then let me lead him through the maze
 
She make me feel sexy and young/
He's beautiful in other ways
 
She makes it so the game I've won/
He desperately needs to get laid
 
She gives sex and validates me for free this one/
He would otherwise have to pay
 
She opens up for me her home/
He any time of day can stay
 
She includes me in the ranks among/
He can lay with me for days
 
She says for an older man I'm still well hung/
He doesn't have to be cute to play
 
She takes me out of my sexless iron lung/
He knows I put him in a daze
 
She makes me penetrate and double tounge/
He surprised himself and knows how to amaze
 
She shows me another side of fun/
He lets me make him bloom like maize
 
She knows in my past words have stung/
He lets me comfort him and keep his fear at bay
 
She makes me feel unashamed with clothes off and strung/
He lets me take off his clothes - unfazed
 
She places us on the same hierarchical rung/
He now knows no hierarchy at all and we are in the same league the same
 
She sees in me some value - unsung/
He's deserving .... so I give him praise!
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A take on the classic 'Heroic Couplet' style poem.
With pronouns starting 'She/He' and rhymes following in the 'tougne/maze' lines format.  Meant to be read as a man and a woman giving their seperate accounts of an intimate encounter and life-changing relationship back to back.
Written by astrosleuth
Published | Edited 9th Jun 2017
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