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'I Felt So Bad .... '

I felt so bad
For you at the bank
It was so sad
Felt your pain, I sank
But it doesn't have to be
You don't have to be lonely
Come lay in bed with me
Even if we do nothing sexy
But I'd like to
Though, totally up to you
We can just lay here and kiss
Slowly inch, into the ecstatic abyss
Or we can just lay here and chat
About life, you're a good person
And I don't think you're fat
We lie together in unison
And I know, you like my tat.
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Irregular Ode style poem.  Read from the woman's point of view.
Written by astrosleuth
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