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storm clouds rest heavy
on mountain peaks
threaten with deep rumbles
rolling over hills
sky deepens to dark
shades of grey
clouds blanket treetops
awaiting the inevitable crash
of thunder
she whispers to the heavens,
"let it rain"
on mountain peaks
threaten with deep rumbles
rolling over hills
sky deepens to dark
shades of grey
clouds blanket treetops
awaiting the inevitable crash
of thunder
she whispers to the heavens,
"let it rain"
Published 29th May 2017
| Edited 30th May 2017
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Anonymous
30th May 2017 00:23am
For heaven's sake my mysterious dame,.
youve stroked my heart so deeply
love, it's electrically beautiful.
I love when it rains, there's nothing
like being nurtured .
I'm content to have crossed paths with you
youve stroked my heart so deeply
love, it's electrically beautiful.
I love when it rains, there's nothing
like being nurtured .
I'm content to have crossed paths with you
31st May 2017 9:27am
Thank you so much Splitsunsets for the read and beautiful comments ... much appreciated
30th May 2017 3:31am
31st May 2017 9:27am
Thank you so much Tim for the read and thoughtful comments ... always appreciated ... I love the rain too ..
30th May 2017 1:03pm
Evocative imagery, Je. I think it's raining all over the world right now. The Spring storms are in full swing here.
And, yes, Let it rain.
And, yes, Let it rain.
31st May 2017 9:28am
Thank you so much Ahavati for the read and thoughtful comments... always appreciated x
30th May 2017 1:04pm
31st May 2017 9:29am
Thank you so much Souladareatease for the read and thoughtful comments...very much appreciated.
30th May 2017 2:54pm
31st May 2017 9:30am
Thank you so much JohnFeddeler for the read and thoughtful comments...always appreciated
31st May 2017 7:24pm
It had me thinking, there's a lass that has been to Scotland during the summer :-)
Nice and atmospheric write :-)
Nice and atmospheric write :-)
