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To Be Free
"To Be Free" by Gal E. Cohen
To be awake
To be surrounded by the unknown
To be living, breathing
To be giving and taking
To be willing to love
To be realizing those dear to your soul
To be coming to conclusions to those actions which make you whole
You are still young, you are very alive
Feel the vibe and send yourself free
To be awake
To be surrounded by the unknown
To be living, breathing
To be giving and taking
To be willing to love
To be realizing those dear to your soul
To be coming to conclusions to those actions which make you whole
You are still young, you are very alive
Feel the vibe and send yourself free
Published 28th Aug 2011
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28th Aug 2011 9:26pm
When you know yourself, you are free to discover others. Those you met before becoming free are like hazy images behind frosted glass that only the warmth of your spirit can melt away. It appears your soul is burning away an eternity of ice that has fled to give way to a new age.
That poem said a lot to me in very few words. Not sure if it said to me what it spoke to you, but I like the way it stimulated my mind. I like this poem more than the check box can express.
That poem said a lot to me in very few words. Not sure if it said to me what it spoke to you, but I like the way it stimulated my mind. I like this poem more than the check box can express.
28th Aug 2011 9:33pm
I totally agree with what you just said, its ok i realize that everybody will not see it the way i do and will think of it in their own way, but it means a lot to me that it speaks to you :) <3
28th Aug 2011 9:35pm
u do ndeed hav a voice
bcuz freedom is ndeed a choice
no shackle & no chain
can eva enslave da brain
& wen dis is da truth dat we hold
we wil 4eva b free n our Souls....;)
bcuz freedom is ndeed a choice
no shackle & no chain
can eva enslave da brain
& wen dis is da truth dat we hold
we wil 4eva b free n our Souls....;)
28th Aug 2011 9:49pm
30th Mar 2012 12:09pm
i reach out to the heart :) its what makes us feel best, and worst. you're welcome. thank your heart for me
28th Mar 2012 4:25pm
30th Mar 2012 12:10pm
31st Oct 2012 10:35pm
Very inspiring! Thank you Gal.
Opinion only here and only a first read but for me the poem seems to shout open your eyes, your world, breath in life and live. In a sense living is the vibe ... the pulse of life.
I could be far off here yet the poem seems to offer up a spiritual recognition as well to life's blessing and through these blessing we are able to transcend the negative and not be bound by restrictive aspects in life.
Opinion only here and only a first read but for me the poem seems to shout open your eyes, your world, breath in life and live. In a sense living is the vibe ... the pulse of life.
I could be far off here yet the poem seems to offer up a spiritual recognition as well to life's blessing and through these blessing we are able to transcend the negative and not be bound by restrictive aspects in life.
