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~PREVIEW OF 'GIVE ME ONE UNFAILING STAR'~
My heart is so brave, in
It's lonely grave,
helplessly asking
'I've learned how to stand,
Learned how to fall.
I've been whole
and torn in two,
Bruised and beaten
so all I ask for..
Is for a night on a river
With you, before you go.
Give me one unfailing star'
..............
It's lonely grave,
helplessly asking
'I've learned how to stand,
Learned how to fall.
I've been whole
and torn in two,
Bruised and beaten
so all I ask for..
Is for a night on a river
With you, before you go.
Give me one unfailing star'
..............
Published 28th Aug 2011
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28th Aug 2011 7:58pm
28th Aug 2011 8:19pm
10th Feb 2015 10:37pm
Seemingly confused by your own attempt at grandeur. "helplessly asking"... only to ramble & stray into violence! No need for periods n commas with a short form! some dainty thoughts yet very undone... keep grindin
