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I am [>>more than>>] I am
warriors in perpetual warring melancholy
drawing more of the pains from nowhere
lean-cut in piercing angular precisions
nothing more . nothing ever more. no dreamy flabbiness
that's blotted to be in swollen comforted zones of sterile dilutions
attracting the queued up endless bouts and bouts
of a ‘vacuum” , a moist-less scantiness, a bleed in-n-out crisis
[pity those complacent lies you showcase in phermonic musks
luring well the wayward eclectic scapegoats and easily cloned
commercial species]
embraces the core, pithy crystalline concentrates
in intuitively lightning geometries and accuracies
the HYPERLOGICAS their pathways ..never ever be sighted
in your shallow swimming radars, if not the remotest
furthermore shimmering possibility of getting decoded
by your turgid escapist egoisms -frothing
abhorrently in fakeness
of an exotic happiness smoothie
happiness is a myth. a lie. an excuse .a trapster ..a deluding pandemic..
an apocalypse
its here where the wayward souls are lost even more
p.s:
#an entry for Miki's Comp-Mandela Effect
##inspired by [& my own metaphored interpretation of] the Deese–Roediger–McDermott paradigm, the related Storebeck & Clore[2005] work on false memory-happiness-sadness... which I feel each bit to be true to the core….not going deep into their analysis though
Published 18th May 2017
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Unless you're referring to a specific group ( which I feel you may be ) misleading laymen with promises of false happiness that doesn't exist ( re: politicians ), I found this fascinating because I believe the contrary. I believe happiness exists within contentedness and acceptance of what exists ( per personal perception ).
I believe it exists inside a nonresistance void of expectation or desire for change beyond each moment. It's living and allowing to live. Unless it's protecting the weak and defenseless, then it becomes giving of self.
Happiness transforms with the circumstance of whatever the moment holds as long as we know its secret: Don't mind what happens.
I'm going to research the Deese–Roediger–McDermott paradigm.
Thank you for the read.
I believe it exists inside a nonresistance void of expectation or desire for change beyond each moment. It's living and allowing to live. Unless it's protecting the weak and defenseless, then it becomes giving of self.
Happiness transforms with the circumstance of whatever the moment holds as long as we know its secret: Don't mind what happens.
I'm going to research the Deese–Roediger–McDermott paradigm.
Thank you for the read.
18th May 2017 8:41am
A very thought provoking piece Uma, and reading Ahavati's comment, it brings to mind how I have believed for a long time how if we have control of our own minds then we can control how we feel. Which means to not be manipulated by another's beliefs or need for control etc.
Great writing as always, the way only you can. Good luck in the comp lovely lady :) x
Great writing as always, the way only you can. Good luck in the comp lovely lady :) x
18th May 2017 12:46pm
happines is intangible, for it to be tang(ent)ible there'd need to be the sine of ups and downs in life with a denominator of a cosine in the circle we call life. there is nothin and there is everything. just look at a circle. it looks like a pie. to calculate its raidus we need another kinda pi :-)
good intriguing write uma
good intriguing write uma
First, in having skimmed over the Deese–Roediger–McDermott paradigm, I am most intrigued by your title. As we are all more than who we are and the sum of our parts ( both physical and spiritual ), and unlimited to this lifetime. I found the study most interesting in that it associated word relation to "false memory", i.e. - how the word 'short' could conjure a false memory of man but 'man' couldn't conjure 'short'. I think the study would benefit greatly if linked to perhaps, Dr. Ian Stevenson's Reincarnation Research.
Perhaps the memories aren't false at all, but deeply embedded in our psych. Thus we subconsciously relate them to others on a deeper level than can be explained by science ( or any other definition available to man ).
That being said, I'm associating your poem, people and attraction, to words and relation...however, not to false memory. Thank you again for such a thought-provoking read.
Perhaps the memories aren't false at all, but deeply embedded in our psych. Thus we subconsciously relate them to others on a deeper level than can be explained by science ( or any other definition available to man ).
That being said, I'm associating your poem, people and attraction, to words and relation...however, not to false memory. Thank you again for such a thought-provoking read.
23rd Jun 2017 00:17am
out of melancholy, & joy, & even love:
to be greater than - where radar is unsighted;
what name is there for your poetries but superlative...
to be greater than - where radar is unsighted;
what name is there for your poetries but superlative...
