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inside me!?
I feel so helpless and lost out of control I don't know what to do how to make it better. Alone every day and night with only my thoughts to keep me company they grow tired and can only do so much for me I am lost in this sea of stars, the souls of life flow through the gills of the giant star of the universe that lives in the heart of the feathers of the raven. That flies into the soul of human form and transforms into a tree of taken minds and freedom.
Published 27th Aug 2011
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3rd Sep 2011 5:49am
You lost me after and before the raven sorry. It could be that im tired as hell and comin down on coke.
3rd Sep 2011 5:08pm
You had to have bin high when you wrote this. Maybe i should read it after i smoke and the meaning will reveal itself.
19th Sep 2011 2:08am
