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addendum
a very personal
addendum
to the dictionary
of obscure emotions
newly unfelt
desire
so strong
inexpressible
almost
as breath
not fully exhaled
inhale eagerly again
tingling
sweet
haziness
don’t pass out
but pin her body
down
hard
floor
body
dick
sliding in
her wetness
pounding in
primal and carnal
cumming in
to unravel
that obscure
divinity
addendum
to the dictionary
of obscure emotions
newly unfelt
desire
so strong
inexpressible
almost
as breath
not fully exhaled
inhale eagerly again
tingling
sweet
haziness
don’t pass out
but pin her body
down
hard
floor
body
dick
sliding in
her wetness
pounding in
primal and carnal
cumming in
to unravel
that obscure
divinity
Published 15th May 2017
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17th May 2017 8:36am
First off... I like the formatting in the end (it's nice to see something different)
Great build up... the repetition of "obscure" really works!
Will definitely read more of your work...
Great build up... the repetition of "obscure" really works!
Will definitely read more of your work...
17th May 2017 9:08am
