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RENGA - laughing tiger
1
mountain clouds
long brush strokes gold
in hiding
2
dawn walk
meditates, roses
pads whisper
3
perfume air
relents to bend
clearing brightens
4
sun heats
plucks Bright Future
flash golden eyes
5
silently sits
thorns prick, offering
tiger laughs
mountain clouds
long brush strokes gold
in hiding
2
dawn walk
meditates, roses
pads whisper
3
perfume air
relents to bend
clearing brightens
4
sun heats
plucks Bright Future
flash golden eyes
5
silently sits
thorns prick, offering
tiger laughs
Published 14th May 2017
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14th May 2017 11:40am
14th May 2017 2:37pm
Thank you, this was more or less an experiment in little words conveying multiple meanings... thanks for seeing the subtle eroticism... geoff
14th May 2017 3:41pm
tigers scare me, and someone gets a pin up from them? geez... yao brave man and a champion write hepcat1
2nd Jul 2017 3:37pm
sorry for the delay - going back catching up - I deeply appreciate your kind words - I feel a voice developing within - that voice may well be mine... geoff
14th May 2017 5:09pm
"this was more or less an experiment in little words conveying multiple meanings... "
which it does very successfully - great write :)
which it does very successfully - great write :)
2nd Jul 2017 3:38pm
sorry for the delay Josh - life got the better of me for a while - thank you I truly appreciate your comment - geoff
