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Cosmos
Ohhh yeah
All right
Girl why don't we swim through the night
Please tell me what is sea, what is sky
Why don't we dance upon the moon
My dear the end could be so soon
Ohhh yeah
All right
My babe don't leave me alone tonight
My babe don't let go of me
All right
Ohhhh yeah
All right
All right
Girl why don't we swim through the night
Please tell me what is sea, what is sky
Why don't we dance upon the moon
My dear the end could be so soon
Ohhh yeah
All right
My babe don't leave me alone tonight
My babe don't let go of me
All right
Ohhhh yeah
All right
Published 11th May 2017
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2nd Jun 2017 12:59pm
7th Jun 2017 00:30am
Not bad at all. Your guitar is a little out of tune, and occasionally your pitches waver, but the song itself was good and your voice is reminiscent of Kurt Cobaine. Practice makes perfect, keep it up!
