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Camera Lights
Little camera's
all around
the subtle spotlight
lifts you off the ground
Fully in the air
We're hardly prepared
to float away w/out care
Chorus
The stars all shine
for you
we couldn't reach
them in our youth
Fall away
into a dreamscape
with me
Battered and bruised
Never caught the balloon
watch over me
as I watch you
Swim in the milky
wondrous sky
watch the beautiful
Camera light's
all around
the subtle spotlight
lifts you off the ground
Fully in the air
We're hardly prepared
to float away w/out care
Chorus
The stars all shine
for you
we couldn't reach
them in our youth
Fall away
into a dreamscape
with me
Battered and bruised
Never caught the balloon
watch over me
as I watch you
Swim in the milky
wondrous sky
watch the beautiful
Camera light's
Published 26th Aug 2011
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29th May 2012 00:31am
simple and erratic... could work with the right picking.... has a fun feel to the message. seemed cut short or incomplete.?.?.
16th Jul 2012 1:14am
it was a quick idea in my head, not fully formed. thanks for the feedback!
6th Jun 2012 10:42am
It's floaty and whimsical, flows exceptionally well and sounds really good, but I still have no idea what these lyrics are about. For an easy smile of a emotive pop song, this works. For something with a deeper meaning, this has me at a loss.
4th Mar 2013 00:08am
If you had fun writing it then what the heck. What is a Sunday afternoon at the beach about...jus fun and relaxing...nice pen.
