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Watchin' you...
...Do me like you do
sends me gone-to
places I'd rather not
admit...
All that sex appeal
you wear, like its unreal
watching' how those
perfect, perky tits sway...
Your nude body, display
a peek of plump ass
fingerin' that tight lil
pussy, just to make my day
Shit, I can't even say
much, becuz I'm lost
in my verse, for words
when you... stop, drop
n' bob as you slow slob
my cockhead wakin'
that dead, silent
snake....
OMG, look how much
you take-in, tickled tonsils
make you grin....
I'm shiverin...' the ache
to release, is sooooo
Uuuggghhhhh ssshhhhiiittt!!!
This could be it!!! Mmmmmmm
Ooohhhhh GFDayumn....
Now ur goin' ham....
Jammin' the head deeper...
Watchin' you...gag
even in my sluuurrr
I stutter, n' utter,
"you're a fuckin' keeper!!"
N' then, I watch you
rip loose the swollen meat
Mouth opened for a treat
wide, usin' no hands...
As spurt, after spurt
gets greedily gobbled
down, drowned in hot cum
Drunk from the rum
you suckle all excess spatter
from fingers n' thumb
licked clean, n' I gotta say...
DAYYuuummnnnn....
I love watchin' you suck...!!
sends me gone-to
places I'd rather not
admit...
All that sex appeal
you wear, like its unreal
watching' how those
perfect, perky tits sway...
Your nude body, display
a peek of plump ass
fingerin' that tight lil
pussy, just to make my day
Shit, I can't even say
much, becuz I'm lost
in my verse, for words
when you... stop, drop
n' bob as you slow slob
my cockhead wakin'
that dead, silent
snake....
OMG, look how much
you take-in, tickled tonsils
make you grin....
I'm shiverin...' the ache
to release, is sooooo
Uuuggghhhhh ssshhhhiiittt!!!
This could be it!!! Mmmmmmm
Ooohhhhh GFDayumn....
Now ur goin' ham....
Jammin' the head deeper...
Watchin' you...gag
even in my sluuurrr
I stutter, n' utter,
"you're a fuckin' keeper!!"
N' then, I watch you
rip loose the swollen meat
Mouth opened for a treat
wide, usin' no hands...
As spurt, after spurt
gets greedily gobbled
down, drowned in hot cum
Drunk from the rum
you suckle all excess spatter
from fingers n' thumb
licked clean, n' I gotta say...
DAYYuuummnnnn....
I love watchin' you suck...!!
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Re. Watchin' you...
Anonymous
26th Apr 2017 2:01pm
I love that you used inarticulate expression in this one. It made it even more visual. I do believe you must have enjoyed this one.
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Re: Re. Watchin' you...
26th Apr 2017 2:18pm
It was just in my mind, reality would've been enjoyable but Yea, pretty much layman's terms for this one... thank you for your support always :)
Re. Watchin' you...
26th Apr 2017 5:15pm
Damn this was on fire. Great job with this one, gonna have to start calling you poeticMastermind now!
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Re: Re. Watchin' you...
26th Apr 2017 8:32pm
Aaaaawww thank you sweetheart! That's very sweet of you to say! I'm honored n truly grateful. :)
Re. Watchin' you...
26th Apr 2017 7:50pm
wow what a way to start off Hump Day... this ink is smokin' hot bro *fist bump*
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Re: Re. Watchin' you...
26th Apr 2017 10:33pm
Yea right!? Lol...big thanks bro. Just trying to rise of the darkness I Bern seeing g n reading round here lately...truly appreciate you much bro! :)
Re. Watchin' you...
Sexy and hot indeed. Love the rawness of this. You made me want to get all dressed up and bust out the heels! <3
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Re: Re. Watchin' you...
26th Apr 2017 10:34pm
Shit I'd be overjoyed to see you all dressed up n in heels! Sounds damn sexy lol n thank you so much I'm grateful as always :)
Re. Watchin' you...
27th Apr 2017 2:38am
Love the freestyle writing of this one as well as its deeply sexy content ;-)
Great to read some erotica, it's getting scarce these days...
Great 'job' Poetik :-)
Great to read some erotica, it's getting scarce these days...
Great 'job' Poetik :-)
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Re: Re. Watchin' you...
27th Apr 2017 3:36am
Aaaaawww... I'm happy you enjoyed this my sweetness... truly, n I agree too many dark n sad pieces been posted lately, so I wanted to try n bring something to hopefully bring some smiles....thank you so much :)
Re. Watchin' you...
27th Apr 2017 8:31am
Re: Re. Watchin' you...
27th Apr 2017 10:40am
Why thank you, I appreciate your visit n thoughts, hopefully you'll make it a habit to stop by... :)
Re: Re. Watchin' you...
28th Apr 2017 1:06pm
Wow...a killer!? Is that a compliment or an insult? lol...anyways, I thank you for the thoughts n time always. :)
Re. Watchin' you...
2nd May 2017 2:02pm
Mmmm...raw, hot and tasty! Your killing me!!! One hell of a visual thanks love!
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Re. Watchin' you...
4th May 2017 7:54am
Re: Re. Watchin' you...
4th May 2017 9:33am
Lol "even had a flow to it" it sure did! lol Thank you so much my sweetheart, appreciate you much! :)