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I want you to
kiss me lusciously
caress me tenderly
lay your soul bare open to me
look into my eyes hypnotically
fuck me passionately
cum all over me
drink me thirstily
ravage me hungrily
fuck me erotically
cum inside of me
then kiss me lusciously
and caress me tenderly
fuck me again differently
please forever stay with me...
Published 25th Aug 2011
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25th Aug 2011 9:00am
Sensual and feverish. Third time is the charm and a choice that you will have to wait and see how it will be. I like!
26th Aug 2011 7:00am
Thank you for enjoying the poem and for liking it, as well as thinking it's sensual and feverish.
:)
:)
29th Jan 2013 3:16am
I agree with you, who ever red this and get nothing they need not 2 b in this forum. Scarlet poetry is erotic. I'm and I love it. #ScarletLike
29th Jan 2013 6:24am
Thank you for taking the time to comment.
I am excited that you got something out of this...
It also reminds me to write some more erotic poetry so thanks.:)
I am excited that you got something out of this...
It also reminds me to write some more erotic poetry so thanks.:)
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25th Aug 2011 2:10pm
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26th Aug 2011 7:05am
Yes with the right person these things are definitely possible... Only some people manage to bring out this type of ecstasy. Thanks for the comment. :)
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25th Aug 2011 5:56pm
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26th Aug 2011 7:08am
Well, my dear Devilman I am glad that you thought it was an erotic delight and excellent read. I can only write these type of poems when the mood strikes me. Thank you for your sweet comment. :)
Anonymous
24th Dec 2011 00:58am
Dripping with delight is right :) this is very well written
27th Dec 2011 00:18am
I am glad you enjoyed it. As you can see from the poem, I was in a certain mood that day. :)
21st Aug 2012 3:26pm
21st Aug 2012 11:53pm
I happen to agree with you. That's what I was trying to convey with this. :)
A near perfect invitation, describing exactly what you want done. I can't imagine that he wouldn't enjoy it every bit as much as you.
28th Nov 2012 3:43pm
I know he knows how and what I meant when I described my "wishes." And, I do believe he really would enjoy this as much as I would. Thank you for your comment. :)
28th Nov 2012 8:12am
28th Nov 2012 3:45pm
Thank you! I am currently contemplating the writing of erotica and also have been thinking of writing longer pieces again. :)
14th Jan 2014 2:00am
fuck me passionately
cum all over me
drink me thirstily
everything 4 u what for him??
cum all over me
drink me thirstily
everything 4 u what for him??
15th Jan 2014 7:50am
Knowing the way he feels, I can say that he enjoys my enjoyment as much
as I enjoy his.....
We are very complementary that way.... :)
as I enjoy his.....
We are very complementary that way.... :)
15th Jan 2014 3:52pm
15th Jan 2014 4:32pm
Hehehe thank u....
perhaps I am not as much of an earthian as u think..... :)
perhaps I am not as much of an earthian as u think..... :)
15th Jan 2014 5:10pm
