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I'm attracted to Poets...
I’m attracted to poets; I feel you should know this
Your very much like me, but so different completely
It’s like you get me, like you know how to get to me
How you pull words apart, and place back together
To mend my broken heart, time and time again
Our inside jokes, the way you say without saying,
So beautiful the game on words that you’re playing
As if your words were a tender kiss on my neck, your aim so direct
That’s one of my spots and you know how I get…
I admire your techniques and skills, your delivery sends chills
You know I’m a sucka for literary thrills
You know how my nature feels, how my sexual aggression builds
And when I try to run you suck me dry, leave me high, relieved and paralyzed
You know my joy and my pain; you know my pillow tear stains
You pour into my veins, your words lock into my brain
Totally confined by your vocabulary chains
I love your honesty; at times it’s too much for me
But it’s always what I need; at least you never lie to me
As if you think my thoughts, bleed my blood, and breathe my air
So much like me, can’t escape the similarity
I’m attracted to poets now that you know this
We’ll always have poetry but there is never enough chemistry…
Your very much like me, but so different completely
It’s like you get me, like you know how to get to me
How you pull words apart, and place back together
To mend my broken heart, time and time again
Our inside jokes, the way you say without saying,
So beautiful the game on words that you’re playing
As if your words were a tender kiss on my neck, your aim so direct
That’s one of my spots and you know how I get…
I admire your techniques and skills, your delivery sends chills
You know I’m a sucka for literary thrills
You know how my nature feels, how my sexual aggression builds
And when I try to run you suck me dry, leave me high, relieved and paralyzed
You know my joy and my pain; you know my pillow tear stains
You pour into my veins, your words lock into my brain
Totally confined by your vocabulary chains
I love your honesty; at times it’s too much for me
But it’s always what I need; at least you never lie to me
As if you think my thoughts, bleed my blood, and breathe my air
So much like me, can’t escape the similarity
I’m attracted to poets now that you know this
We’ll always have poetry but there is never enough chemistry…
Written by
FreeLove87
(SamuraiEde)
Published 2nd Apr 2017
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Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
2nd Apr 2017 6:09pm
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2nd Apr 2017 6:20pm
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2nd Apr 2017 6:20pm
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2nd Apr 2017 7:04pm
Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
2nd Apr 2017 9:56pm
Wow,
That was really well written.
On point the whole way through.
Excellent read.
Thank you for this
That was really well written.
On point the whole way through.
Excellent read.
Thank you for this
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2nd Apr 2017 10:10pm
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3rd Apr 2017 2:12am
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3rd Apr 2017 12:39pm
Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
How beautiful you found a connection like this. The poetic draw is one that is always missed when not present. There is nothing more drawing then a connection of words. When words connect, the spirit and song of physical nature can only be music in the blood from there. Deep magnetive write. Hold on to that connection for dear life. <3
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Re: Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
5th Apr 2017 11:14pm
I always look forward to your insight. poetic attractiveness can be very powerful and also blinding though I know it has been for me a time or two. By all means keep that connection but let it birth others that last as well... thanks for reading
Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
5th Apr 2017 3:54pm
The power of words, how well I know the poetic spell...
I don't think I can ever be with someone who isn't skilled with language
"Totally confined by your vocabulary chains" > love this line and love your poem!
I don't think I can ever be with someone who isn't skilled with language
"Totally confined by your vocabulary chains" > love this line and love your poem!
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Re: Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
5th Apr 2017 11:09pm
I agree 100% gotta be connected with words... just can't be our only connection thanks for the read :)
Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
5th Apr 2017 7:05pm
Beautifully said Mr. FreeLove and I agree, some of you writers are truly felt.
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5th Apr 2017 11:10pm
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10th Apr 2017 1:08pm
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10th Apr 2017 1:22pm
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15th Apr 2017 3:36pm
And poets love you too especially with this piece. No chemistry? hmmm good familiarity breeds contempt lol. thanks for sharing a very alluring and flattering piece.... kinda makes our community even more special. keeping this !!
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16th Apr 2017 5:17am
its a strong bond, and the attraction happen so suddenly you cant help but get swept away once in a while,thans for reading
Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
6th Sep 2017 9:57am
This poet is so with you on this. In my world people don't read poetry and when they read mine I know they are just being nice and don't really get it. Beautiful write.
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Never know, them not understanding might be for the best, delivering words with such force and making people gravitate towards you can unconsciously make your poetic attractiveness a deadly weapon lol glad you enjoyed this
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6th Sep 2017 11:28am
Hmm ... poetry as a weapon ... never thought of it that way ... that is a different perspective. Thanks for giving me another vantage point!
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Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
5th Jan 2018 10:27pm
You're right: poets do understand one another, better than anyone else. I love the imagery you've portrayed. It's evident that you have a deeply burning passion for poetry and the brother/sisterhood with fellow poets.
Well done!
Well done!
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I think poets are both unconscionably and consciously attracted to one another so naturally we gravitate to those will similar vibes as our own...thanks for reading
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6th Jan 2018 1:07am
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Anonymous
11th Mar 2018 11:15pm
So so on point all throughout this vibe
that last line sealed the deal
"We’ll always have poetry but there is never enough chemistry…"
T-shirt material!!!
Brand that bro!!!
that last line sealed the deal
"We’ll always have poetry but there is never enough chemistry…"
T-shirt material!!!
Brand that bro!!!
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Re: Re. I'm attracted to Poets...
14th Mar 2018 7:54am
I appreciate that... i feel most poets can deeply relate with the vibe
if it pans out you'll definitely receive a complimentary shirt
if it pans out you'll definitely receive a complimentary shirt
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9th Apr 2018 2:38am
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9th Apr 2018 4:38pm
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13th Jan 2020 10:50pm
Oh WOW, you are completely right.
Thats the deal. I guess its the power, the mind connection we share, because of this form of art we breath.
Im blown away.
Thats the deal. I guess its the power, the mind connection we share, because of this form of art we breath.
Im blown away.
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