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Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 1:11am
Well down below could be both good and bad...depends on which hell you're entering...the fiery kind or the passionate one...enjoyed this David... 😉
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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30th Mar 2017 1:16am
Or, it could be about oral sex :-) I left this poem deliberately vague allowing the reader to draw their own narrative :-) thank you for reading and commenting :-)
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Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 1:24am
Precisely what I meant! 😉 Always a pleasure to read you David!
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30th Mar 2017 3:18am
well spotted - I wrote it about oral sex but wanted folks to think of Hell :-) thank you again :-)
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