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One final adieu
We met on the same day
you turned another love away
didn't care
because I wanted you
as you wanted me too
Felt special for a while
awakened feelings of a child
new and number one to someone
and that someone was you
Said you saw my girl-like aura
detected hinting blush
I surrendered to your safety
set myself free to laugh again
swept inside emotion's
surging ocean (and I swam!)
But changing tides ripped me away
from your current point-of-view
Saw desires shift like tidal flows
rocked by a monsoon
So now I bid you fondly
this . one final . adieu
https://allpoetry.com/poem/13277363-One-final-adieu-by-WhiteTiger
you turned another love away
didn't care
because I wanted you
as you wanted me too
Felt special for a while
awakened feelings of a child
new and number one to someone
and that someone was you
Said you saw my girl-like aura
detected hinting blush
I surrendered to your safety
set myself free to laugh again
swept inside emotion's
surging ocean (and I swam!)
But changing tides ripped me away
from your current point-of-view
Saw desires shift like tidal flows
rocked by a monsoon
So now I bid you fondly
this . one final . adieu
https://allpoetry.com/poem/13277363-One-final-adieu-by-WhiteTiger
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