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Seeking Sanity~
Pandora's box has been tightly sealed
remnants of what once was
is scattered now in northerly winds
...vision is lost
Dying time wages on
like a war between
decay and the stillborn
Fighting something that
cannot be seen
while loving with third eye open
...soul retrieval countdown
Drifting between yesterday
and today
That is where the sun meets moon
Survival of the fetus hidden inside the blind
spots of a road overly traveled
leaves healing as the daily mantra
...be reborn or die
So black and white is the palate
of this life
...the answers lie in the dark side of the moon
Seeking Sanity~
remnants of what once was
is scattered now in northerly winds
...vision is lost
Dying time wages on
like a war between
decay and the stillborn
Fighting something that
cannot be seen
while loving with third eye open
...soul retrieval countdown
Drifting between yesterday
and today
That is where the sun meets moon
Survival of the fetus hidden inside the blind
spots of a road overly traveled
leaves healing as the daily mantra
...be reborn or die
So black and white is the palate
of this life
...the answers lie in the dark side of the moon
Seeking Sanity~
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Re. Seeking Sanity~
28th Mar 2017 12:36pm
I think when it is found we don't realize it~says the wandering lunatic...
Beautiful rhythm to this, it reads in that slow introspective feel that guides Us...without question...we could not be good people!!!
Welcome to DU!!!
Beautiful rhythm to this, it reads in that slow introspective feel that guides Us...without question...we could not be good people!!!
Welcome to DU!!!
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Re: Re. Seeking Sanity~
28th Mar 2017 8:11pm
I wander as a life mission it seems lol. Thank you for the great words and for the RL...you rock..xo
Re. Seeking Sanity~
28th Mar 2017 1:28pm
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28th Mar 2017 8:12pm
Re. Seeking Sanity~
28th Mar 2017 1:59pm
really like the picture.
so many answers have to be on the dark side of our moon...
enjoyed your ideas.
so many answers have to be on the dark side of our moon...
enjoyed your ideas.
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Re: Re. Seeking Sanity~
28th Mar 2017 8:12pm
Yes thats where you rest and see the rest of the world carry on .. thank you..xo
Re. Seeking Sanity~
29th Mar 2017 11:06am
Uh oh...I found a real talent... that pen's stroke can't be a Newby's one! Excellent
first post! :)
first post! :)
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Re: Re. Seeking Sanity~
30th Mar 2017 00:03am
Re. Seeking Sanity~
Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 2:09am
Hey Trace......pic is beautiful........your words are so heart touching........such a gifted ink flowing from your pen.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Seeking Sanity~
30th Mar 2017 3:45am
Re. Seeking Sanity~
31st Mar 2017 4:56am
So black and white is the palate
of this life
Often so true - lovely write
Welcome to the DUP:)
of this life
Often so true - lovely write
Welcome to the DUP:)
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Re: Re. Seeking Sanity~
31st Mar 2017 5:00am
Re. Seeking Sanity~
1st Apr 2017 00:38am
Another gritty, soulful write, Tracey, I could feel it n my bones.
You left it where you should have left it . . . So many things are
left on "the dark side of the moon."
You left it where you should have left it . . . So many things are
left on "the dark side of the moon."
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Re. Seeking Sanity~
1st Apr 2017 00:44am
Thank you.. and I appreciate your kind words. You are so right.. so many things we need are on that side of the moon..xo
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Anonymous
7th Apr 2017 3:19pm
You are an amazing woman, so amazing. Here, I feel entranced and sanctioned.
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8th Apr 2017 3:57am
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Anonymous
8th Apr 2017 5:36am
Tracey.. welcome to DU.. brilliant ink, love your imagery..
Dave
Dave
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Re. Seeking Sanity~
29th Sep 2019 1:42pm
Dear T,
“So black and white is the palate
of this life ”
This piece is very raw. This line drew me in as I thought about it more and considered it true and yet so much more of life lands in the grey matter for me. Where the hard edged lines of black and white are blended and blurry making decisions about things so much harder. Excellent write! H🌷
“So black and white is the palate
of this life ”
This piece is very raw. This line drew me in as I thought about it more and considered it true and yet so much more of life lands in the grey matter for me. Where the hard edged lines of black and white are blended and blurry making decisions about things so much harder. Excellent write! H🌷
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Re: Re. Seeking Sanity~
30th Sep 2019 7:42am
Life is so fragile. It seems as if it's black and white in one moment and then life lands awhile in the grey. It makes us all feel alive right? :) Thank you again for reading me and for a great review..xoxo
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