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fly
Every time i close my eyes
I dream I can fly
But when my feet come off the ground
You grab me and pull me back down
I wish I may I wish I might
Try to fly again to night
Without you pulling me down out the sky.
I dream I can fly
But when my feet come off the ground
You grab me and pull me back down
I wish I may I wish I might
Try to fly again to night
Without you pulling me down out the sky.
Published 27th Mar 2017
| Edited 12th Apr 2017
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18th Oct 2017 8:21pm
Really liked the simplicity of this poem. I did think it would flow better if you left off the last line.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
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"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
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