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outside heaven
a bird of Paradise
alights
on a balustrade
outside
an ancient palace
in whose courtyard
a king sits
with his favoured priests
trying to foresee
the actions of gods
who sit in Paradise
watching
alights
on a balustrade
outside
an ancient palace
in whose courtyard
a king sits
with his favoured priests
trying to foresee
the actions of gods
who sit in Paradise
watching
Published 24th Mar 2017
| Edited 27th Sep 2018
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Anonymous
- Edited 24th Mar 2017 5:51pm
24th Mar 2017 5:01pm
I wondered if you'd described a painting. then thought: doesn't all poetry. which lead to minutes of thought about other stuff inextricably connected to both. so I would say whatever witchcraft you used here worked
24th Mar 2017 11:11pm
26th Mar 2017 3:49am
Anonymous
9th Apr 2017 5:34am
Ive read of your pieces, they're very picturesque. Cool, will read more
