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Black as Your Soul
Inspired by pr3tty h8 mach1ne...Nine Inch Nails Competition
Black as your soul
As dark as mine too
I'd rather die
Then let you see through
No, you can't take it
The loss of all control
Bowing down to serve
Darkness black as coal
Black as your soul
As dark as mine too
I'd rather die
Then let you see through
No, you can't take it
The loss of all control
Bowing down to serve
Darkness black as coal
Published 24th Mar 2017
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*cough 'your' and 'coal' cough*
:D
Just a sister helping a sister out. ;)
Otherwise I enjoyed it. :)
:D
Just a sister helping a sister out. ;)
Otherwise I enjoyed it. :)
lol...thanks for that catch! Made a few other small adjustments as well. Much appreciated Ahavati:)
24th Mar 2017 1:48pm
Lol at Ahavati she be on dat grind though!
lol... Anywho, short but very strong n emotive inking :)
lol... Anywho, short but very strong n emotive inking :)
24th Mar 2017 2:01pm
