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cafe flesh
i want to suck you off
the barista unwittingly said when she
looked me up and down
would you be so kind
i replied
and ordered a long black
my gaze poured down her curves
spilled over the counter as she
drew my name in the shape of a cock
on the paper cup
the waitress
attuned to the proposition
asked if i’d fancy a slice of raisin toast
with
melted butter
the depraved tap of pen
against her tooth was a signal
[mister] fuck me in the asshole
was the deciphered code
sounds good
i’m ravenous
was my reply
the barista’s breasts quivered
when she slammed the portafilter handle
emptied the last shot and reloaded
then firmly pressed the tamper puck
cutlery and glass chimed
tables and chairs trembled
when the machine burst into action
grinding aromatic coffee bean
spluttering froth and steam
it was blatantly clear
the customers
they weren't in this joint only for the brew
the women relished the ramshackle vibe
and the men were mystified
by the business of breakfast
Written by
case28
(Alexander Case)
Published 22nd Mar 2017
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- Edited 21st Sep 2020 1:45pm
22nd Mar 2017 1:53pm
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Re: Re. cafe flesh
You know I was so... distracted by the theatre of coffee and blow jobs that I didn't even notice they had a breakfast menu. So I made the mistake of going back, the barista was still there, and she remembered my name, but unfortunately melting butt her girl was replaced... by something less apertising.
So I ruined the fantasy, man. But I can confirm they don't do eggs and bacon. Erotica is a rare thing for me, and when I do find the inspiration I throw in the humour and bluntness, because I don't take sex too serious and I don't like to beat around the bush... I guess you could call it brazilian erotica.
Thanks heaps for your great feedback, John.
So I ruined the fantasy, man. But I can confirm they don't do eggs and bacon. Erotica is a rare thing for me, and when I do find the inspiration I throw in the humour and bluntness, because I don't take sex too serious and I don't like to beat around the bush... I guess you could call it brazilian erotica.
Thanks heaps for your great feedback, John.
Re. cafe flesh
22nd Mar 2017 3:05pm
What a wake-up call--indeed--mo Chara!
With the deeply pleasurable combination of coffee and sustenance--.how the melding (and melting :p ) of your seemingly mundane, everyday occurrences into sudden metaphors of sensuality....wellllll...;;;all create cleverly crafted, erotic poetry that is truly your signature style!!
This is just what i needed for a chilly morning! (.....and BTW....i will NEVER visit my favorite coffeehouse/restaurant/diner--e v e r again-- with quite the same "perception"......thank-you, very much! :D LOL! )
With the deeply pleasurable combination of coffee and sustenance--.how the melding (and melting :p ) of your seemingly mundane, everyday occurrences into sudden metaphors of sensuality....wellllll...;;;all create cleverly crafted, erotic poetry that is truly your signature style!!
This is just what i needed for a chilly morning! (.....and BTW....i will NEVER visit my favorite coffeehouse/restaurant/diner--e v e r again-- with quite the same "perception"......thank-you, very much! :D LOL! )
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I'm stoked you enjoyed e humour and sustenance of coffee sex poetry. It's mundane days like these and the awareness that someone was discretely checking out their customers that makes having a good imagination so much morefun.
Thank you soooo much, Enchantress, for dropping by to comment and share your thoughts.
Thank you soooo much, Enchantress, for dropping by to comment and share your thoughts.
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Haha, I'm sure she said "I want to clean your table off" and your name would kinda have to curve around the paper cup, she would be writing it on there so you know which one is your's and which is your work colleagues, tut tut Alexander. The imagination of a poet huh... :P
Only kidding, always enjoyed your right to the point blunt erotica, and again here, also the touch of humour. I remember something you wrote about a fridge door once? :D Great stuff you.
Only kidding, always enjoyed your right to the point blunt erotica, and again here, also the touch of humour. I remember something you wrote about a fridge door once? :D Great stuff you.
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Yes, you're correct there was another erotic poem called felacio by the fridge... another blow job poem. I am a little disappointed however, that you think this whole sex coffee thing was just all my imagination... but I'll take blunt erotica as a compliment.
Thanks heaps, Magdalena [you cheeky woman], for your great feeback.
Thanks heaps, Magdalena [you cheeky woman], for your great feeback.
Re. cafe flesh
22nd Mar 2017 5:34pm
Mr. Case you always surprise me with your erotics in a humorous and wonderful way.. I love the opening playfulness to the bold insinuations very sexy touches.. very imaginative poetry ;)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. cafe flesh
31st Mar 2017 3:42pm
Brenda, thank you for your great comment, but I insist that this poem is not some silly fantasy of mine, I can read minds and I know what women think. ;)
Re. cafe flesh
22nd Mar 2017 7:03pm
Re: Re. cafe flesh
31st Mar 2017 3:46pm
I call it brazilian coffee bean erotic poetry, because I don't beat around the bush and I'm crazy about sexy humour. Thanks heaps for dropping in to read my stuff.
Re. cafe flesh
23rd Mar 2017 1:44am
this is indeed a sexy poem, all that steam - I fantasize like that in cafe's and coffee shops - That's the trick nobody know what anyone is really thinking or scheming - I have always fond fantasies are always better in the head :-)
Another excellent poem, really got me thinking :-)
Another excellent poem, really got me thinking :-)
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Re: Re. cafe flesh
31st Mar 2017 3:53pm
I totally agree about keeping fantasies mental, because things never turn out the way we imagine when try to breath life into something inflatable... that's why I always carry a puncture repair kit. :)
Thanks heaps for your great feedback, David.
Thanks heaps for your great feedback, David.
Re. cafe flesh
28th Mar 2017 5:52am
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31st Mar 2017 3:56pm
Tarantino did say himself that he doesn't need someone to tell how fucking good his coffee is...
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Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 8:23pm
i wanted a make a crack about coffee creamer and liking my eggs unfertilized in the mornin but i'll refrain...
... really dig this case, sharp & humorous
particularly dig the coffee machine :) pulling an espresso always reminds me of orgasms
just a bloody clever write really
xx
k
... really dig this case, sharp & humorous
particularly dig the coffee machine :) pulling an espresso always reminds me of orgasms
just a bloody clever write really
xx
k
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You should've cracked a joke about the coffee creamer and unfertilised eggs... :) but I'm super stoked anyway that my coffee sex fiend friend DIGS my poem! I try to be clever, perhaps I try a little too hard and sharp just sounds dangerous to me. Thanks HEAPS, your feedback means a lot, Katja.
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haven't read what the others have said case...
my god, this one is one for filming, actors who can get the non verbals down pat as there's no dialogue for the cast, just a voice reading your words at the appropriate moments. 👍
my god, this one is one for filming, actors who can get the non verbals down pat as there's no dialogue for the cast, just a voice reading your words at the appropriate moments. 👍
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Re: Re. cafe flesh
I believe there's a porno series called Cafe Flesh, with plenty of non verbal sex scenes that capture the feeling of this poem. If I'd seen the films I'm sure I'd strongly recommend them... it would be better than anything I could pull off.
No pun intended... ahem.
No pun intended... ahem.
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Anonymous
10th May 2017 7:28am
Ok maybe its just me, my way of thinking on cafe flesh,
and where can i find this place? lol, hmmmm
and where can i find this place? lol, hmmmm
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Well, to experience the atmosphere of this cafe, you'd have to somehow get inside my head... and that my dear, apart from the thoughts of debaucheraus sex, may not be such a thrilling experience.
Unfortunately, my wonderful Cafe Flesh is under new management... and mum and daughter arguing at the counter didn't do it for me, so I don't do their coffee no more, which means I'm currently desperate and available.
My apologies for the extremely tardy reply.
Unfortunately, my wonderful Cafe Flesh is under new management... and mum and daughter arguing at the counter didn't do it for me, so I don't do their coffee no more, which means I'm currently desperate and available.
My apologies for the extremely tardy reply.
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 2:28pm
Well I do love coffee... and like Splitsunsets said, where is this marvelous place! Very nice piece Mister Case.
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Re: Re. cafe flesh
19th Nov 2018 3:15pm
Well, thank you, Soft_lilac. I'm pleased you found your way to my token erotic offering. But I'm sorry to say my cafe of the flesh is under new management, and they just don't do coffee like they use to.