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A 21st Century Poet
No longer submerged in seduction of a lover's tongue
left hanging out where no word is sung
defunct of function or fancy form
lost are the layers gradually getting you warm
Here and now before thoughts do pass
free flowing spewing out too fast
rhythm and rhyme left to chance
sterile simplicity caught in a trance
In a world caught up in instant gratification
what is the satisfaction
if feelings don't play a part
in your poetic art
A 21st century poet I heard him say
unrefined rhetoric put on display
left hanging out where no word is sung
defunct of function or fancy form
lost are the layers gradually getting you warm
Here and now before thoughts do pass
free flowing spewing out too fast
rhythm and rhyme left to chance
sterile simplicity caught in a trance
In a world caught up in instant gratification
what is the satisfaction
if feelings don't play a part
in your poetic art
A 21st century poet I heard him say
unrefined rhetoric put on display
Published 17th Mar 2017
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18th Mar 2017 8:12am
Anonymous
18th Mar 2017 4:01pm
It seems like there are a lot of poetic styles on here and out in the world. I may not enjoy all of them, but I appreciate the effort. Feeling is the thing that makes them breathe. Good observation
Anonymous
18th Mar 2017 4:21pm
ah lordi lord do i feel this one, tim
sometimes the muse abandons
& the words echo so hollowly
a stunning write
sometimes the muse abandons
& the words echo so hollowly
a stunning write
23rd Jul 2017 5:27am
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