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Night
Blade edged black obsidian,
Flares glinting in its gamuts.
Cut away the heart its weight.
Hard rock, moguled, faceting.
Shining shows our frailest thoughts.
Dreams, the stuff our pain becomes.
Brightest Star, you restless move.
Touch your fire's eternal spark,
Clutch I might feel your pulsing.
Like Mab, dispense your subtle rest,
Extract me with inclined pursuit,
And wanton lay me home.
Flares glinting in its gamuts.
Cut away the heart its weight.
Hard rock, moguled, faceting.
Shining shows our frailest thoughts.
Dreams, the stuff our pain becomes.
Brightest Star, you restless move.
Touch your fire's eternal spark,
Clutch I might feel your pulsing.
Like Mab, dispense your subtle rest,
Extract me with inclined pursuit,
And wanton lay me home.
Published 17th Mar 2017
| Edited 18th Mar 2017
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17th Mar 2017 1:26pm
Oh ...oh... I reach for the words, for I was there, but they have melded into my veins and have escaped me save for the emotions that stay.
Trilogy!
Trilogy!
you honor me... it is a poem with duel ideas: one is about night, sleep and dreaming after a hard day... the other is about love making and the rest that's found in its after wards... I bow,
tommy
tommy
8th Aug 2017 2:32am
this felt vaguely related to romance, if at all. my favorite part of this poem is the second stanza.
