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let 'em live- take a break
take the high ground
why stop there
why not take
the whole ground up there?
sick of this high horse
perspective
why can't you just live
and leave others alone
to live
those seeking flowers
will seek 'em out
and get 'em
their own way
no need to shove
a bouquet down their eyes
let 'em discover
let 'em recover
their own way
their own day
and time
poetry
may not be
just 'bout the rhyme
but it surely beckons
seekers
and seek will they do
so
relax
take a break
and
if you're not finding peace
then go
spend a sunset by a lake!
let them live!
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
why stop there
why not take
the whole ground up there?
sick of this high horse
perspective
why can't you just live
and leave others alone
to live
those seeking flowers
will seek 'em out
and get 'em
their own way
no need to shove
a bouquet down their eyes
let 'em discover
let 'em recover
their own way
their own day
and time
poetry
may not be
just 'bout the rhyme
but it surely beckons
seekers
and seek will they do
so
relax
take a break
and
if you're not finding peace
then go
spend a sunset by a lake!
let them live!
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
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Re. let 'em live- take a break
17th Mar 2017 7:10am
if you're not finding peace
then go
spend a sunset by a lake!
best advice - meaningful poem in beautiful simplicity
then go
spend a sunset by a lake!
best advice - meaningful poem in beautiful simplicity
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Re: Re. let 'em live- take a break
18th Mar 2017 1:20am
Welcome Dear friend PersonaNG! I thank you for the kind appreciation and keen insight. Matters a lot! regards KDAmB
Re. let 'em live- take a break
17th Mar 2017 2:55pm
Re: Re. let 'em live- take a break
18th Mar 2017 1:21am
Welcome dear poet! I thank you sincerely for your visit and generous praise. regards KDAmB
Re. let 'em live- take a break
17th Mar 2017 4:20pm
Re: Re. let 'em live- take a break
18th Mar 2017 1:22am
Welcome Jerry! praise from you is praise indeed Sir! I am chuffed. Cheers! KDAmB
Re. let 'em live- take a break
17th Mar 2017 4:58pm
an excellent poem of good advice. This advice would work for most folks, unfortunately not all :-)
I loved this :-)
I loved this :-)
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Re: Re. let 'em live- take a break
18th Mar 2017 1:25am
Welcome Dear Dave! yes.. unfortunately truewon't work for all, I'll be glad if - on reading this one soul is left alone and not hassled. Glad you liked the vent. Cheers KDAmB
Re: Re. let 'em live- take a break
19th Mar 2017 3:57am
Re. let 'em live- take a break
22nd Mar 2017 5:53am
"Live and let live" is what I always say!
I love your 'no holding back, tell it as it is' style :-)
Great write, dear friend
I love your 'no holding back, tell it as it is' style :-)
Great write, dear friend
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Re: Re. let 'em live- take a break
My dear Friend Duende! ☺ First of all, please accept my apologies for the delay in replying.
I welcome your presence and appreciation of my rant with such kindness.
Thank You so much indeed.
Kind regards KDAmB
I welcome your presence and appreciation of my rant with such kindness.
Thank You so much indeed.
Kind regards KDAmB