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If I had a gun

 
If I had a gun
i'd shoot the following words
without hesitation
or delay

they are me, mine and i
for this man
to have true compassion
this indeed is necessary

I'd replace
the above three
with reference
to self in third
despite the shortness of lenghts
they are love consuming words

reference in third person
indeed has it's beauty
you see your own self
alongside the others

allows you to get
'your' context right
stops pecks of dust
gathering on your heart
in essence
it is nothing but your pride
thats gathers with each
venerable reference to self
or
in other  words
each reference to self
using the aforementioned
enforcing a bit more of
compassion
to self than others

so gimme that
literal gun
so that
I  can truly
have some fun!






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