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Slowly
Slowly
ever so slowly
overcome with emotion
building up ever so quickly
inside
passions burning ever so quickly
reside
deep in my heart
sweet smells of your luscious gateau
roam free
a slight breeze blows in your hazel hair
enhancing your essence
enticing me
slowly
ever so slowly
I wrap my arms around your
aphrodite-esque waist
squeezing ever so slightly
whispering
"love me"
ever so slowly
overcome with emotion
building up ever so quickly
inside
passions burning ever so quickly
reside
deep in my heart
sweet smells of your luscious gateau
roam free
a slight breeze blows in your hazel hair
enhancing your essence
enticing me
slowly
ever so slowly
I wrap my arms around your
aphrodite-esque waist
squeezing ever so slightly
whispering
"love me"
Published 11th Mar 2017
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Anonymous
12th Mar 2017 1:06am
Beautiful canvas you've painted here
Anonymous
14th Mar 2017 3:40am
It`s the slow hand
penned around
this poem
that bares life ...
Sweet ...
~Devlin
14th Mar 2017 3:51am
Anonymous
14th Mar 2017 4:03pm
Your spacing in this was brilliance...it forced this to be read at the pace you intended the reader to do so making it all the more lovely. Wonderfully done.
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
