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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
11th Mar 2017 11:45am
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Re: Re. She Does
Thanks Amelia -
I am so very glad to hear that You Do -
like this poem - a lot =P
This piece was inspired
by the poetess - "She Does" -
from the now defunct - poets.com site
(it was bought out by another poetry site
and no longer has the same format...)
appreciate you taking the time
to read and comment
ALL the Best
jonni
I am so very glad to hear that You Do -
like this poem - a lot =P
This piece was inspired
by the poetess - "She Does" -
from the now defunct - poets.com site
(it was bought out by another poetry site
and no longer has the same format...)
appreciate you taking the time
to read and comment
ALL the Best
jonni
Re. She Does
11th Mar 2017 12:21pm
Re: Re. She Does
Thanks SweetOBLVN
Appreciate you taking the time
to read and comment
ALL the Best
jonni
Re. She Does
11th Mar 2017 9:40pm
You are very meticulous to detail Jonni. As an artist, that is an incredible attribute. I commend you. Well done, dear.
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Re. She Does
11th Mar 2017 9:48pm
Thanks LostGirl !!
Glad you liked this piece.
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
ALL the Best
jonni
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 1:45am
14th Mar 2017 9:22pm
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Re: Re. She Does
Thanks XQsit_Chaos
you are much too kind
so glad that you enjoyed this work
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment
ALL the Best
jonni
you are much too kind
so glad that you enjoyed this work
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment
ALL the Best
jonni
Re. She Does
Anonymous
24th Mar 2017 4:41pm
Love just how beautifully much I can feel this.
Jonni, I am like wax pouring over.
Jonni, I am like wax pouring over.
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Re. She Does
29th Mar 2017 3:25am
Aye - Thank SplitSunsets
Glad you enjoyed this piece.
ummm - please dont ask me how to
get wax out of a bear skin rug. =P
ALL the Best
jonni
Re. She Does
25th Dec 2017 7:13am
Re. She Does
29th Dec 2017 10:14pm
here ya go -
shhh -
in this sylence
i do listen
to the words
thou hast written
of the night
there was spoken
true heart's devotion
an' days that followed
brought laughter
now sorrow
an' in the darkness after
beats a heart
that is hollowed
what one must bare
when the heart be torn
be there a one that cares ?
'twas all for nought ?
'tis all love forlorn ?
shhh -
in this sylence
i do listen
to the words
thou hast written
of true love's disaster
an' the mourning after
i send this note
that all may read
an' it matters not
if none pay heed
as long as
She Does
shhh -
in this sylence
i do listen
to the words
thou hast written
of the night
there was spoken
true heart's devotion
an' days that followed
brought laughter
now sorrow
an' in the darkness after
beats a heart
that is hollowed
what one must bare
when the heart be torn
be there a one that cares ?
'twas all for nought ?
'tis all love forlorn ?
shhh -
in this sylence
i do listen
to the words
thou hast written
of true love's disaster
an' the mourning after
i send this note
that all may read
an' it matters not
if none pay heed
as long as
She Does