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Sober
A brightening path
future yet to gain
past becomes an unlit stage
never meant to remain
The heart again beats
strength grows inside
haze is lifted
no ache to hide
This tortured soul no longer cries
tears have gone away
silent, hollow, empty nights
now becoming day
future yet to gain
past becomes an unlit stage
never meant to remain
The heart again beats
strength grows inside
haze is lifted
no ache to hide
This tortured soul no longer cries
tears have gone away
silent, hollow, empty nights
now becoming day
Published 11th Mar 2017
| Edited 19th Feb 2024
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11th Mar 2017 3:15am
11th Mar 2017 6:34am
It shouldn't go unnoticed your talent for saying so much in so few words. Interesting analogy for the past.
11th Mar 2017 7:47am
Thank you kindly...I write to let go or embrace...sometimes short works...just enough:) Thanks again.
11th Mar 2017 9:32am
Liked the way you put the transition from darkness to the light. Very well delivered, that's my view. Welcome to DU!!
regards
KDAmB
regards
KDAmB
11th Mar 2017 10:27am
