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Re. Epistle (for JohnRot)
4th Mar 2017 1:41am
What a great Tribute-I hope he peeks and sees this!!!
I miss that salty dog-But as You say...
Also...kick-ass moment:
"You dragged your boots heavy with mud never wiping your feet
Mixing blood, zinc and gunpowder smearing on skin, finger on the trigger
Listening to sound of dirt hit the coffin. Each word spilled, ten hid in beard
Pouring more coffee in our mug waiting for drowning."
I miss that salty dog-But as You say...
Also...kick-ass moment:
"You dragged your boots heavy with mud never wiping your feet
Mixing blood, zinc and gunpowder smearing on skin, finger on the trigger
Listening to sound of dirt hit the coffin. Each word spilled, ten hid in beard
Pouring more coffee in our mug waiting for drowning."
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Re: Re. Epistle (for JohnRot)
4th Mar 2017 1:46am
That last line is sort of borrowed from one of his poems 'he pours more coffee in her cup than his' He's definitely missed but he ever came back, he wouldn't recognize this place anymore. So many greats have left, they made this place the deep underground.
Re: Re. Epistle (for JohnRot)
4th Mar 2017 1:47am
So true...and yes...indeed I do remember that...he had many memorable lines that witty prick lol
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Re. Epistle (for JohnRot)
4th Mar 2017 2:01am
Don't know him, but clearly your affection for him is strong... excellent dedication ink... n btw, I may not be the best but I'm
still here :)
still here :)
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Re: Re. Epistle (for JohnRot)
4th Mar 2017 3:54pm
...and i hope you continue to stay on PIKM. Dammit if you leave, i'm definitely leaving with you lol yep, he sure left his mark on some of us who came to du for what du truly represented.
Re. Epistle (for JohnRot)
4th Mar 2017 6:08am
slick words he dropped on paper
& those that remained in his beard;
what sunset must await us...
& those that remained in his beard;
what sunset must await us...
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Re. Epistle (for JohnRot)
4th Mar 2017 8:45am
There's one he wrote a couple of years back about his favourite chick on the underground - inimitable
But if he read this...
yep there was muscularity and mud in many of those writers
But if he read this...
yep there was muscularity and mud in many of those writers
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Re. Epistle
5th Mar 2017 11:18am
Great tribute to one of my favorite poets on here, John was special.
Lovely pen, Vee.
~anonshadow😏
Lovely pen, Vee.
~anonshadow😏
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Re. Epistle
Anonymous
11th Mar 2017 1:34am
Rina.. as always brilliant.. with love..
Dave
Dave

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Re. Epistle
2nd Apr 2017 9:18pm
It's fascinating from end to end. I keep pouring over it. My favorite part is undoubtedly this,
"We start walking with our hands instead of our feet
Somedays slower than heartbeat"
It's so smooth, original and jazzy, displays much wisdom. Loved this.
Also, "Each word spilled, ten hid in beard" Hmph. Such gorgeous riddles.
"We start walking with our hands instead of our feet
Somedays slower than heartbeat"
It's so smooth, original and jazzy, displays much wisdom. Loved this.
Also, "Each word spilled, ten hid in beard" Hmph. Such gorgeous riddles.
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